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Open Poetry #11

Thinking By Jamie

spiked
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0 posted 2000-12-23 04:32 PM

Thinking
By Jamie Rendall

When you write a poem
It is to think. There are a lot of things you can write about, but you think to write about something everybody wants to read.
You think it has to be perfect, well your really out of your mind.
You don’t have to write about something somebody else wants you to write, What you feel and think is awesome.
Writing and thinking are for you and you only. You should think what you think and write what you write.

This was written by my 9 year old Daughter while I was sitting down writing. Thought it might be nice to post what she wrote.
Rich

serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-12-23 04:50 PM

Talent obviously runs in your family!!!!
and what I want to know, is how does Jamie know I am out of mind? j/k Jamie--NOT!!!!

But I really loved your poem, and hope to read many many more from you!!!!

Love your new format, Rich...very becoming style for you!!! Hugs to all, and Merry Christmas!!!

spiked
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2 posted 2000-12-24 02:29 AM

Thank you Serenity and hugs Merry Fristmas to you too

EagleScorpion
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3 posted 2000-12-24 02:38 AM

Wow. I thought you wrote it at first!! And thats NOT an insult!!

spiked
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4 posted 2000-12-24 09:37 AM

Thanks eagle and Merry Christmas

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