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Feathers...Haiku
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Feathers...Haiku |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 feathers on a pile waiting for the right moment afraid spreading wings Charisma only in for a few minutes, can't resist to post this one. Hope that you all will have wonderful days. |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful haiku! Thank you for sharing, and have a wonderful holiday! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a sweet picture ... and your words compliment it perfectly Charisma ... he's got that "do I or don't I" look! Nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah yes...delightful... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Charisma, a few minutes from you is worth a lifetime of some others. Write on, in song Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, I don't believe it. LOL well done. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Love the poem and young robin in the picture. Neat. jwesley |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
 Bravo for a great write! and Merry Christmas! my friend!  Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
lovebug: Thank you for your kind reply hope that your day's were wonderful. Kit: yes he have that look..and I am glad that you like the haiku sunshine: thank you for reading and replyKethry: you are to kind....love your comments Seymour: don't you believe it???,.....well me too...I think he will spread his wings, we all do when time is there...right? jwesley: thank you for your kind reply, glad that you like them both. KoKo: thank you for your wonderful wish..hope that your day's were wonderful.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Your wings are spread - and you SOAR ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I like the serenity in this scene. The beauty of the shy bird adds a sweet touch. Very nice Haiku. Deb |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
It is never an easy decision to spread those wings but eventually we do and then the world becomes ours. So fly my friend, fly high and long. Happy New Year to you. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Perfect...afraid to fly but dont have a choice....loved this |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge: wonderful friend, thank you for the cheering up....you have seen my inner inhere, you know me better than I tought. Bloomingrose: thank you for your kind words, glad that you like it. Mark: you too my friend, have seen it too just as Marge....thank you for the faith in me...and I wish you a very happy new year too. Paula: thank you for your kind reply, I am really glad that you love this haiku. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Charisma, Superbly written! Never be afraid to "spread your wings". Our wings and our hearts are what let us soar into our dreams. Elise |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Athena4: Thank you for your kind reply, and we all have to spread our wings once, but sometimes its hard to do that.. |
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