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New York (revised) |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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New York. Drops of rain on the tables Reflect the skyscrapers And the fly on the window buzzes At the flashing-by buses The green of the Central Park attracts More people than Saks On fifth avenue. As the gravity pulls down Warm rays, all around Grass breaks through the molten granite. No where else on the planet Does the eye meet such metamorphosis. Long abandoned offices, Warm showers, sunshine, morning dew... My applause to you! “Big Apple,” I beg you with all my soul, Please, resist the fall. < !signature--> Check out my poetry here: http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet [This message has been edited by Master (edited 12-23-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And all this time I thought that you couldn't see nature from there. Wonderful write. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Isn't it a remarkable place? As a people watcher? I find it fascinating...very, very nice work here Master. Thanks for the trip! |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I have a love/hate relationship with New York. Thanks for replying and happy holidays! Check out my poetry here: http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I revised it a bit, any suggestions/critique? Check out my poetry here: http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet |
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