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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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rewrite of Doreens Challenge of fill in the blanks.. Tonight, the evening is to be filled with the reality of you. You've come to her amidst the shadows in her view. To fill the empty, the pages of her heart and mind. Wishing that she could hold you within, until the dark shall, morning find. Turned one by one, imprinted words, everlasting upon her grace Those eyes that gaze upon heaven's blue, as thoughts together lace Capturing this heart of one, relentlessly to yearn. Wondering what it is that erupts and fires her passion's burn. Tonight, together you are both as one, desires met, in sheerness of. She's with you there, so deeply connected, held by woven threads of love. Fulfillment complete, and cherished by each, she shall forever honour thee. Tonight, it's true, her love for you has reached it's ecstasy. When morning light beholds the truth, and shines through reigning myst Awakens she from pillowed thoughts, from warmth of being kissed. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
WOW this is a great poem. I loved it. It left me with the warm fuzzy feeling. Love and light, Richard |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful love poem! Very well done for sure Wynter I really enjoyed the setting and the mood.....have a nice holiday....ethome |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Nakedthoughts--I love it! nicely done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh what beaituful writings...very well penned ~HUG~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wynter...you've been peeking in my window....and my mind! So wonderful...and accurate  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Richard- the challenge warmed me up too thank you E- thank you, I will try my best which isn't always enough  huggzzzzzzz dear friendPoeminister- glad you loved it huggzz and happy holidays to you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Tracie- glad you enjoyed Balladeer- I don't peek in windows but yes, I do peek in minds whenever I can... thank you both ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
you breathed life into this once-dormant poem. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you, I think ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wynter, well done.. Sun shines!... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
nothing dormant about it from beginning or end....it's fabulous. and my favorite line... " her love for you has reached it's ecstasy." makes me feel like a wild Irish Rose, if I may say that without sounding like I'm well...never mind!!!!!!< !signature--> "Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell." Joan Crawford [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 12-25-2000).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sun shines- thank you for the nice comment Hey ~~Wild One~~ thank you..gave me a smile...wondering.. glad you liked it..I am not sure what was meant by dormant before but everyone has their own definitions..*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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