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Once Whispered Snowflakes
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Once Whispered Snowflakes |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Once Whispered Snowflakes Virginia Salter once whispered snowflakes now drip from the eaves as warm reaches its tentacles toward remaining fall leaves lying about strewn by the wind and I await here in the warm, dry shelter, willingly pinned © December 22, 2000 |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I loved the way this whispered through me. Beautiful feelings, very soft. Much love and Christmas hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This was a lovely portrait of one of winter's wonders. I loved the visions it left and the penning was superb to say the least. I applaud you and the way you think. Loved it much. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Oh, you almost make me wish I was back in the snow and winter-like weather! ALMOST  We winter in Texas and I guess this brings back memories of the times in my younger life. Happy holidays, ME |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you all for the sweet, tender, encouraging responses! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lovely images, Virginia...I can see the drip from the icicles now...and the rainbows therein... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
A very sweet and peaceful read! Merry Christmas!! stay warm in love! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
the title pulled me in and im glad it did...this poem reminds me of haiku, for short and concise, it conjures images in this reader's mind... well done |
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