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crawl into a shallow night |
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carolinehill Junior Member
since 2000-12-21
Posts 14 |
Crawl into a shallow night thin air escaping starving lips Only sleep will see us through So drip into unconciousness sharp regret can clean the skin Absence swift, lets sins run wild hopelessness is shelter still |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
caroline, welcome to Passions. . . this is filled with superb imagery. . . hope to see more from you. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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carolinehill Junior Member
since 2000-12-21
Posts 14 |
thankyou sven im glad to be here |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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carolinehill Junior Member
since 2000-12-21
Posts 14 |
thankyou so much sunshine, the card was lovely |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Nice write and welcome to Passions! |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Short and sweet...yet to the point... Good writing...  I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Welcome PoetLady... Thank you for sharing this splendid write... coco |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I, too, am pretty ambivelant about sleep. Welcome to Passions, caroline! Looking forward to reading more from you! |
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