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The Joy of Meadows
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The Joy of Meadows |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
~The Joy of Meadows~ My aching heart wants for you to see What your words of I love you have done to me The silence of bitter tears is all I keep Touch me, I dare you, and know what I feel... It hurts too much to have you coming around So now is the time for us to move on You may get mad and become unkind When I say we're better off without a you and I Speak to me, I implore you, and for once be true... Don't say that you'll change or more time you need My love has been tested over and over it seems Can you not see how our life has shifted Just yesterday three, now blind to innocence Promise me, I besiege you, and swear this you keep Release your hold unto my heart I plea So child and I may embrace the joy of meadows in peace...  [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-21-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Coco...if I thought for one instant that he would understand? I would send this to him...that is how closely you have "nailed" my heart this day..I thank you much. |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
WOW wonderful writing. I really enjoyed the read. Love and light, Richard Live like there is a tomorrow. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Serenity, my dear, with those words you say in reply just made me sigh a relief to know that someone out there in this stream of life knows of what I speak and for this sweetie I thank you... MAX, you got me smiling with that 'WOW', my thanks to you for your kind reply...  coco |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Coco... How sad to feel this, I know...I felt the sadness, yet strength also... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Coco, Sometimes writing can break the spell And you wrote it well. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Coco poetfriend, this is from your heart. . . excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
LL, So glad you picked up on the strength part and I appreciate you taking the time to peak at this poem... SEYMOUR, My friend, I hope so sweetie and thank you for the moment you took to comment as I smile upon your words of comfort... SVEN, Psssssst.... and I thought I concealed it so well Hmmmm.... thank you PoetFriend for your constant support and most touching reply you have shared with me tonite... |
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