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kaile
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0 posted 2000-12-21 10:43 AM


abruptly i realised
just how lonely
i feel
when i catch myself
peeking eagerly
at my handphone
when the beep beep sound is heard

im left wondering
why do i still bother


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Sven
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1 posted 2000-12-21 01:30 PM


because you still want it to be there. . .

I know how you feel kaile. . . and this says it all. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


dgvarner
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2 posted 2000-12-21 04:44 PM


amazing how deeply that sudden realization of lonliness can cut, aye kaile..

whats worse is when you can almost feel someones arms around you..then you feel the draft between you--and your dream...  

i hope your lonliness fades...

hugs, g
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"people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s.



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3 posted 2000-12-21 07:06 PM


I have had that feeling before...it's not fun

when one loses love, it's bad
when one loses hope, it's devastating

things do get better, though....they always do....

kaile
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4 posted 2000-12-26 09:45 PM


thanx all for your kind warm words..i am feeling better...amazing what a holiday can do to replenish your sagging soul...

regards

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5 posted 2000-12-26 10:35 PM


kaile,

You bother because you are hoping someone will reach out in your time of need.  Glad to hear you feel better.  Hope you had a wonderful holiday.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Mon Cherie
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6 posted 2001-12-24 12:47 PM


Hahaa... I think I know that feeling. It's the reason why I check my emails everyday (in the hope that someone actually drops me a personal email, preferably some  unexpected person). I guess it's only normal... it's something you can look forward to in your (probably) boring daily life.

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Florence

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7 posted 2003-01-27 10:16 AM


yeah...I know the feeling
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