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Take a Letter Maria

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 12-21-2000 05:23 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Take a Letter Maria

Hi hon, how are you.  I'm not doing so hot.
I've spent some time thinking about you and
I miss you alot.
I miss the lovely smile on your beautiful face
and I miss the comfort found within your warm embrace.
I miss looking at you and admiring you in all your natural beauty.
I miss your voice.   Soft, sweet and soothing.
Sure miss those romantic evenings we spent together
feeling your breasts poking me in the chest.
And your kiss, that too I miss.
But don't worry about me because I'm alright.
I'm your friend and I'll never pretend to be anything more than what we are.
Our friendship will take us where we desire to go.
It will move mountains for us and refresh our weary souls.
We'll build on a solid foundation, a rock.
This is very important to me.
I'll never let our friendship just wash away
like grains of sand washed into the sea.
Believe in me because I am....

Your friend,  James

Jameslee@December20,2000


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Irish Rose
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1 posted 12-21-2000 06:48 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

it's that poke in the chest that makes the letter loud and clear....whooohhhhhh
I must be feeling the Christmas spirit, I sure did enjoy this!!!!!!

"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day,
so I never have to live without you."

Winnie the Pooh


ethome
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2 posted 12-21-2000 06:59 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

James this has quite a turn-a-round within the bounds of the verse. I like the positive aspect...the deriving of something good at least from the pain of separation....but the old fire is there and you've written that in there very well..I enjoyed!!
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 12-21-2000 07:00 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Our friendship will take us where we desire to go.
It will move mountains for us and refresh our weary souls.
We'll build on a solid foundation, a rock.
This is very important to me.
I'll never let our friendship just wash away
like grains of sand washed into the sea.
Believe in me because I am....

special...very special words, James  

~WYnter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


KokoStewartKoomoa
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4 posted 12-21-2000 09:00 AM       View Profile for KokoStewartKoomoa   Email KokoStewartKoomoa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit KokoStewartKoomoa's Home Page   View IP for KokoStewartKoomoa

very touching and hopeful! Keep the faith! Mele Kalikimaka!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko


kaile
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5 posted 12-21-2000 09:59 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

thanx for the soulbaring piece...i do think its nice of you to be content to remain a friend when you may still be hurting...

hugs
Paula Finn
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6 posted 12-21-2000 10:22 AM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

James...is good to know that friendship comes first...and that you have the courage and the heart to take it father when the time is right...being a friend first is so important...Merry Christmas sweetie
JamesMichael
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7 posted 01-11-2001 05:52 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I thank you all for the lovely comments...Paula I am working on the friendship thing...not as easy as I thought...still takes two willing participants...one may want to be casual and the other desire a little more...
I have a new friend that honestly seems to appreciate me more than any woman I have been close to...we'll see what happens...James
JamesMichael
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8 posted 05-18-2004 02:22 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Like this...James
 
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