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Of Remembered Curlicues
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Of Remembered Curlicues |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Of Remembered Curlicues ~*Marge Tindal*~  I reach within the well of me dip my quill in ink of sage penning thoughts calligraphic upon the barren page As if on cue, the curlicues stroked with ease and grace magically begin to appear as thoughts are artfully traced I step back from the easel gazing in amaze The render tendered says to me another time - another place A thought-o-graph has presented another's smile of revealing grace Have I penned another's heart from some other time and place I wonder ... ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I really like this Marge...... "A thought-o-graph has presented another's smile of revealing grace Have I penned another's heart from some other time and place." That is so pure and poetic and I love the idea of the whole piece..well done as usual Marge!!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is absolutely divine, I really and truly love this one. It's so elegant and wonderful. Pure enjoyment  I love itTake care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
Often I feel the pull to a time and places never lived and my pen relects them. I also wonder. Maybe I did not drink long enough from the River Lethe at the end of those past lives. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I always love your titles...and of course your words A thought-o-graph ..wonderfullllllllllll huggzz and a wish for a wonderful holiday season to you Marge ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
As if on cue, the curlicues stroked with ease and grace magically begin to appear as thoughts are artfully traced I step back from the easel gazing in amaze The render tendered says to me another time - another place ==================== beautiful Margie ... love the premise of this one...very cool with so many unique muses its no wonder to me that you take us to many farway lands and long ago times later-time-machine-gator jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I enjoyed this one very much...the feeling of living in another time and place... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Your imagination is beautiful and so is the poem. *L* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ I appreciate you, my friend. Thank you for understanding. Marsha~ Thanks for the elegant. That is just exactly the way she comes to me. JohnR~ I am also drawn to several places of the past. I find the ink in my well ... and it commands me write. Wynter~ I thank you for that. If a title can pull you in - then half of my pleasure is done. JanetMarie~ As you well know, the muses in my life are numerous. Each one uniquely different. All I need do - is listen and I'm there. Thank you always for your replies. Paula~ Thank you. Yes, strong feelings of the past draw me back to where I was and enlighten me as to where I am, or should be. Seymour~ Thank you, poet. 'Imagination is of three kinds: joined with belief of that which is to come, joined with memory of that which is past, and of things present, or as if they were present. --Bacon.' What a wonderful gift we are given to share. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a wonderful write...very creative and enlightning! Nathan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nate, my friend~ Thank you for recognizing the creativity of this traveled mind. Happy Holidays to you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In response to the query, indeed you have...oft times I think..."I wish I had written that"...or "where's my muse? O! Over there on Marge's shoulder!" And this, my dear friend, is a keeper.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Hugging your neck for that reply. You know where this one came from - and we've both been there. Thank you for believing in me. ~Hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kindasorta Member
since 2000-12-02
Posts 56 |
Excellent! Bravo!! Very original and I loved the 'feel' of this one. Really enjoyed this read and this one took me somewhere, making me think where, reflecting. Just loved it.  |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
I don't where you get all your ideas...you have this magical way of making something wonderful out of something simple... I love that... I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KindaSorta~ Thank you for seeing the originality in this piece. She comes to me and I write through her thoughts. Breathe~ Hmmmm ! Sometimes, I wonder too. Thank you so very much for the reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
you reach within the well of you??? Is that a wishin' well, Marge? I'm wishin'!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ Sounds more to me like you're fishing ! But, in case you want to throw a coin in - make it a 1787 Brasher Doubloon ! BIG HUGS ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
very cool yuh i love how you state your ideas in poetic form yuh |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ Thank you. I sure enjoy sharing them and getting inspiration from others. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Marge, Let me take this reply to tell you how much I admire and appreciate you. I read somewhere and I don't know who said it, that everything we write is an original, unique thought and has never been written before and probably never again. I just wanted to share that with you and wish you and yours a Merry Christmas. "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge this takes me back in time. Very beautiful. Deb |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ And I also appreciate you. Thank you so much for the nice thoughts. BloomingRose~ Aren't those nostalgic trips just wonderful ? Thanks, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
As always it was awesome  . I loved the whole concept.~Susie "Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?" ~Cinderella |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Angel~ Thank you, sweet gal. So good to see you peeking in for a visit. *Hugs* for the New Year. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I personally think that maybe you have been blessed with a part of all our lives because you could be intrusted to take such good care of the gift. How else could you possible see life as deep and beautiful as you do. You are one of the angels among us for sure my friend and I for one am thankful for all the times I find you on my shoulder. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Mark~ That is just the sincerest thought from you. I love you ... you warm my heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always paint someone's heart, each time you write a poem |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you, Dixie~ I try~ Reading the replies to this reminds me of just how much I miss Maga~ Mark Bohannan ...  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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