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I'll Write You!...response to Doreen's Write me
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I'll Write You!...response to Doreen's Write me |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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I'll write you, girl I'll write you good! You'll feel like A woman should. I'll pen those lines With such desire The paper might Just catch on fire! My words will jump Right off the page They're bound to make Your hormones rage! Oh, yes, I'll write Of ecstacy till you can't wait To get to me! I'll write you high I'll write you low I'll write in ways That you can't know! My passioned pen Will do so great The ink just might Evaporate! You think I'm good? You feel smitten? Wait till you read The words I've written! Your mouth will gasp Your jaw will drop! You'll feel an urge That will not stop! Write me..you say? Look out, DP You ain't been writ By none like me! And if you think My words aren't bad I'll write the next Lines at your pad!  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
'Deer, Oh my! Oh my Oh my! love this one I really do. Excellant, watch out D P take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ THIS IS WONDERFUL ... she's gonna just love it !  Now quickly, before postage goes up - MALE IT ... er, Mail it !  *Hey ... Doreen ! ! It's getting real warm in here ! You've done heated up the ink in Balladeer's well. It's no longer chilling - with that man's quilling ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Um, I think she mentioned ringing her up first...was that to bolt the door, or throw it open? Great job 'deer...it's going to get steamy tonight.... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marsha....three Oh, my's?? OH MY!!! :0 Marge...nuttin like hot ink!! The check is in the male!! susnshine..LOL!! Good question!! Well, I had a steamy day...why not a steamy night?? Thank you!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
< !signature--> it's full of fire and passion.... "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 12-22-2000).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You go, Deer... Write 'er UP... um... Write it down.. um... WRITE ON'er..!?!!..  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Balladeer...... my screen's on fire cause you write with sweet desire Your pen is full of wicked ink I can't even say just what I think!! -SEA |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
.... it is written....damn. i'm speechless. imagine THAT? LOL *wink* ((hug)) i almost felt unwrapped....... this was wonderful! thank you, sweet Poet |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
WOW! Woohooo Doreen ... you've got that pen just a flamin', LOL. Wonderful style you've written this in Michael, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
   Keth |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
'Deer - a wonderful poem deserving of a response - heh |
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