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shinamoon
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since 2000-12-07
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0 posted 2000-12-20 06:28 PM



                 Ask me again....

Ask me again if I love you
and the answer will be the same
I can only love you
if you will feel the same.

Ask me again willl I stay
and the answer will be  true
I will stay for ever
if you always do.

Ask me again do I need you
and the answer will be strong
I will need a friend
for my whole life long.

Ask me again do want you
and my answer will always be
I'll want you for as long as you want me.




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Nan
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1 posted 2000-12-20 08:10 PM


Sounds like a fair deal to me... Well said, shina..
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2000-12-21 03:21 PM


Yes I had to go thru this...gets kind of lonely falling in love all by yourself...so now they must also fall in love with me...ha..ha...if it would only work this way...and soon enough you will see how a friendship is the most important aspect...and love will or will not grow from that friendship but the friendship can survive...James
wayoutwalt
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3 posted 2000-12-21 09:06 PM


shinamoon your poem tells me you aint no needy girl. great poem i say.
shinamoon
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4 posted 2000-12-26 08:16 PM


thanks for the replies and james  it is difficult to fall in love alone  seems to happen that way alot for most of us
walt  definitely not needy  been alone and happy  with someone and happy  either way i will survive but with is better

kaile
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5 posted 2000-12-26 08:40 PM


powerful verse and you have just brought me a new perspective on life itself,shina...i always try to give myself, regardless of whether the other person will reciprocate...though sometimes i do get weary doing so...

gives me something to think about

Denise
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6 posted 2000-12-27 09:38 AM


Welcome to Passions, Shinamoon! I think strength is the most attractive quality that one can possess! You've said it well!

Denise

vandana
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7 posted 2000-12-28 12:33 PM


Welcome to passions!!!!!!!! Nice poem
passing shadows
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8 posted 2005-04-22 08:20 PM


very sweet
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