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Werewolf's Song (Bad Moonlight)
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Werewolf's Song (Bad Moonlight) |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I bet some of you probaly want a Christmas poem from me but right now I'm kinda in a slump so writing a Christmas one is a little challenge...I'll probaly post last years poem here...anyways, this piece was inspired by a book I read from RL Stine about a year ago...it was originally called Bad Moonlight but then it got switched to Werewolf's song cause it seems melodic...anyways, I hope y'll enjoy! Bad moonlight, bad moonlight, please come out for me tonight. Bad moonlight, bad moonlight, I'm begging you, with all my might. Please come, oh beautiful one! Please stay, and never go away! Please come out and shine yourself on me because, this wolf's very, very, lonely. Bad moonlight, bad moonlight, please come out for me tonight. Bad moonlight, bad moonlight, I'm begging you, with all my might. Oh bad moonlight, you make me cold, through my soul, and in my mold. You put rough hair over my body, making it feel rough and brisky. You give me sharper teeth, for better things to eat. You make my eyes more darker and fiercer, while my human qualities grow scarcier. You add two more legs to give me four, which makes me twice as faster than before as, I'm a human's nightmare cause, one look at me, spells fear. I chase down my prey in pursuit of their blood and it's something I can't get enough of as, none of this would be without bad moolight so, I thanks for my revival, in the time of night. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Ok, I'm going to be on the watch out for you the next time I see a "Bad Moonlight". I hope you don't still feel lonely. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Inot, for your comments! Nathan |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Nate Dogg, Well done on this piece. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Daniel D for your wonderful comments. Nathan |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Great one Nate!! and you're right. . . it is melodic!! --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Reminds me of the 'Werewolf Serenade' from American Werewolf in London (yes showing my age again LOL) Great read had me HOOOOOOWWWWLLLLLLing too!! Merry Christmas Isis *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Sven and Isis for your wonderful comments! Nathan |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Nathan...creeping softly through the night...standing in the full moons light...reveling in my changing form...full moon now before the storm...hide the children hide then well...here comes a demon straight from hell...flashing eyes and wicked teeth...all the world soon will weep...I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Thanks to you...the dogs are locked outside tonight...much to their changrine...*L* (Did I spell that right?) Nice scarey images...  I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Paula and Breathe, for your hilarious comments! Nathan |
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