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I Gave My All
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I Gave My All |
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Cassandra Junior Member
since 2000-12-16
Posts 48Charlotte, North Carolina, USA |
I gave my all to you.. My body, soul, and heart Gave my trust, through and through Then sadly you let us drift apart... Her more beautiful than I Don't worry these aren't tears.. I will not cry For you the greass was greener on the other side I stood back watching.. all this pain I was forced to hide Shattered dreams and a broken soul My heart weeped as I watched you go She completes you.. something I could never do.. But know my love for you is honest and true.. How blind I was to not see Our love together wasn't meant to be.. I'll let you go without a fight Lonely I'll drift into the night..  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Cassandra, this is so heartfelt, a really lovely piece from you. Utterly terrific, I really love this one. And you are doing beautifully. Well done  Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Cassandra Junior Member
since 2000-12-16
Posts 48Charlotte, North Carolina, USA |
Marsha~ Thank you so much.. you have made me feel so welcome here. You're heart is filled with much love and joy.. and I thank you for your kind words and acceptance. You're a wonderful person. --Cassandra |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
There is much sadness here. It is hard to stand back and watch your love walk away! Take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This has happened to me before...they seems so much happier talking to someone else on the phone...or with someone else..I suppose sometimes we do get mixed up with the wrong one...and we suffer as a result of this...James |
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Cassandra Junior Member
since 2000-12-16
Posts 48Charlotte, North Carolina, USA |
EagleOne~ Yes, it is quite hard.. and it holds a pain inside of it that nobody should ever have to endure. I've been through it just once.. and its one thing I never want to experience again. Thank you for your review and kind words. Best wishes  jmlee~ I'm sorry you have also had to go through something like this.. as I once did.. its quite a painful ordeal. If I could have my way... nobody would ever have to get mixed up with the wrong one.. and no pain like this would be felt. I hope things are better for you now. Thank you for being so kind. --Cassandra |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
HUGS |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
so many know this feeling..heartfelt indeed HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Cassandra Junior Member
since 2000-12-16
Posts 48Charlotte, North Carolina, USA |
RainbowGirl~ Thank you very much for the hugs.. it seems that lately I have been in need of them.. *hugs* backatcha Victoria~ I agree.. far too many know these feeling... *hugs* to you as well.. Seasons best to you both.. --Cassandra |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Unfortunately most of us know this feeling and it is one that never truely goes away. You have penned your heart well and I wish for you the beauty and love that you deserve. Hugs [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 12-19-2000).] |
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Cassandra Junior Member
since 2000-12-16
Posts 48Charlotte, North Carolina, USA |
Mark~ I can't thank you enough for the heartfelt reply and hugs.. You are quite the kind soul... May your heart and soul be filled with joy. Happy Holidays to you, friend. *hugs* --Cassandra |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Heartfelt words my friend, wish you well, and yours will come someday. jwesley |
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Cassandra Junior Member
since 2000-12-16
Posts 48Charlotte, North Carolina, USA |
jwesley~ Thank you kindly for the sweet wishes and review. Happy Holidays, to you friend. --Cassandra |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Cassandra~ this is so painful to go through......hopefully we get stronger each time something like this happens, without hiding our hearts.......wonderful write -SEA |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Gee lady am i ever sorry you have to feel this pain. I can so relate to your words. I wrote a poem is the grass greener and your poem reminded of it and I think I will post it. Very good writing. Love and light, Richard |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
cassandra~ first off love your name. its so beautiful. secondly this was a wonderful piece from you. full of heart and soul. it was very sad...but also very honest and sincere. take care of yourself and keep writing. i look forward to reading more from you. ~amy~ ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed it!!!!!! |
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Cassandra Junior Member
since 2000-12-16
Posts 48Charlotte, North Carolina, USA |
SEA~ Thank you for the kind words and the review... its a true honor to have someone of such talent review my write. Thank you and happy holidays to you. maxtec1~ I'm very thankful for you words and I'm glad that you could relate to this in some form. I look forward to reading your post.. seasons best to you, friend Aimster~ Thank you for the sweet compliments on my name and also for the sincere review. Best wishes to you. Vandana~ I'm glad you enjoyed my write.. thank you and happy holidays Pssst! Aimster.. I've always thought Amy was a beautiful name myself Thank you all! --Cassandra |
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