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SEA
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0 posted 2000-12-19 02:56 AM



You could have had me
for a smile........
your personality
charm and style

You could have had me
for a walk
because you listen
when I talk

You could have had me
for a dance
I'm such a sucker
for romance

You could have had me
for words spoken true
all I needed to hear was
I love you

~SEA~


* just an old ache visiting me tonight *






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John R
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1 posted 2000-12-19 02:59 AM


A little romance goes a long way doesn't it SEA.  As always your poems are right to the point and expressed so well.

If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John


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2 posted 2000-12-19 03:00 AM


SEA...

Wow, this one`s really great...It`s a shame the 3 magic words never came...But they will I know. When you least expect it.
here`s a little flower to thank you
----<-@

-Ramses-

Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2000-12-19 03:02 AM


Now that is one man that made the mistake of his lifetime.  So painful to know that you were so willing yet that the love you held was not seen and returned by the one that you directed it to.  Nice to know that you found the one that makes you so happy these days my friend because you look so damn good in love and you wear it with grace and ellegance in your words.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Cassandra
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4 posted 2000-12-19 03:03 AM


Oh wow.. beautiful. All these writes are making my heart ache for Craig (My boyfriend). *sigh* A very talented one you are SEA. I'll go hug my pillow and cry now. Happy Holidays to you and yours.  


--Cassandra

SEA
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5 posted 2000-12-19 03:07 AM


John~ Romance is the key, I think   thanks

Ramses~ it's ok I guess, I have a love that is true now  

Mark~ I wish you could have told him that about 9 years ago......oh well......yea, my hubby is the best   thank you for your praise......you know I eat it up  

Cassandra~ sorry you are missing your man.....hope you have sweet dreams   thank you  

-SEA

Lady Lightning
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6 posted 2000-12-19 03:14 AM


How sweet your words are..an aching yes, but you ache beautifully..   And I know I don't have to tell you I'm putting this one away for later...   I liked.. ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

tracie66
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7 posted 2000-12-19 04:25 AM


~hug~
SEA sweet pea
your ache was felt
Floating lotsa winged ~HUGS~ your way
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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8 posted 2000-12-19 08:16 AM


You write for all of us in love with romance and romancing love.  And you do it so very well  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


JamesMichael
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9 posted 2000-12-19 08:23 AM


Sea I suppose all these thoughts only work when romancing sweet one's like you...James
ethome
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10 posted 2000-12-19 08:29 AM


Just letting him know that he could have had you but he was just lacking in some areas fo romance...if there is anyone out there that this is directed to I think he NEEDS to read it because he's gonna crash and burn everywhere he goes......take care....ethome
Charisma
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11 posted 2000-12-19 08:37 AM


oh Sea......love it.....and I could see, why he could have you.....you are one loving piece.....enjoyed reading this lovely piece.

I can't come in the next few days...so I want to wish you




have wonderful loving holliday's my friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

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12 posted 2000-12-19 12:38 PM


SEA~  you have shared your heart so beautifully....ohhhh how these words ring true for me.....thanks for this.....

Greeneyes~

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"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown


kcsgrandma
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13 posted 2000-12-19 12:55 PM


I was drawn by the title, because I've been there, and you wrote exactly what I felt.  Glad you found someone who appreciates you.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

a_little_girl
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14 posted 2000-12-19 12:56 PM


Romance can hurt sometimes, believe me. The pain will go away sometime though, you just have to wait for it to pass.
--Lil' Girl

dgvarner
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15 posted 2000-12-19 12:59 PM


those old aches'll getcha sometimes aye SEA...

but i think the ache just came in to drop off a wonderful little ditty for you to share with us  

hugs, g

"people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s.


Startime
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16 posted 2000-12-19 01:33 PM


Sweetie, I am so very glad you have love in your life. It makes all the difference in the world. Much love and hugs to you from me.
http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/StartimesPoetry.html

Sunshine
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17 posted 2000-12-19 01:45 PM


Somehow we never quite forget that first real, true love, the one that touched our heart the most even others have loved us, even when we know this truest love is not meant to be...

somehow we just never forget...



Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




SEA
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18 posted 2000-12-19 01:50 PM


LL~ so very sweet.......thank you!!  

Tracie~ love your hugs   thanks!  

Interloper~ so do you my friend  

James~ thank you, you are the sweet one!

Ethome~ back then, he knew, believe me, it was no secret......thank you for the crash and burn.....he's happily married now.....and so am I  

Charisma~ thank you sweetie, I will mis you...have a beautiful Chrismas!!

Greeneyes~ thank you!!  

Kcsgrandma~glad I could touch you......yes, I do have someone wonderful now! thanks  

Lil' girl~ it comes and goes, but mostly resides in memories........thank you  

DG~ you know they do.... thank you so much  

Startime~ yes it does......I'm very grateful for my husbands love   Thanks  

-SEA

SEA
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19 posted 2000-12-19 01:52 PM


Sunshine~ no, we never do forget it do we?   We should learn from it and keep it safe in our memories   thanks   -SEA
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20 posted 2000-12-19 01:55 PM


Circe, Oh I know those if only's and but's This is such a brilliant write from you love it really is. Uttertly wonderful, it really is. And I'm so happy for you that you found the happiness that you deserve.
Take care kid  
                    Mushy
                      
       Merry Christmas have a good one
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



maxtec1
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21 posted 2000-12-19 04:06 PM


gee if I had only known. LOl I loved it dear friend. Very good writing.
Love and light,
Richard

peppermint35
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22 posted 2000-12-19 05:02 PM


Of all the phrases in the English language....the if only's are the worst; aren't they?

Lovely write...as always...keeping this one for my library   Hugs, Pep

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

RobertB
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23 posted 2000-12-19 05:29 PM


Very good SEA.......


Robert

SEA
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Thank you Marsha  

Richard.......I tried to tell ya.... thanks

Pepper, you are awesome..... thanks

RobertB...... thank you

-SEA

Lone Wolf
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25 posted 2000-12-19 08:15 PM


SEA,

Well in my opinion it is their loss not yours!!  You are a wonderful, kind, caring, person my friend.  You will find someone even better . . . I just know it!!  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

snowpants
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26 posted 2000-12-19 09:20 PM


SEA, I am so there with you on this one.  It is DEFINITELY his loss, which I am learning as well.  Great write!!  Gotta keep this one!

sp  


I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

jwesley
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27 posted 2000-12-19 09:25 PM


Old aches, memories, past things, whatever one calls them they hold a special place in the heart, as the beauty in this well shows.
Thanks for sharing your heart...


jwesley

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