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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-12-18 11:12 PM


          Harboring Heights

          I safeguard these moments
          of high
          natural and not otherwise
          so the moment
          stays fresh in my mind

          I want to recall
          the sing of my heart
          the kick start
          in my memories
          the feel of the real

          for you have taken me
          to a height
          that I would normally
          avert ~
          not now

          somehow
          you make this height
          come real, be right
          and giddy
          bubbles

          O see me fly high
          in my mind's sigh
          come sky with me
          and write in clouds
          aloud

          I love you!

          Can it be in
          this heart of me
          to harbor heights
          of fantasy
          just for we?



Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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1 posted 2000-12-18 11:26 PM


I DO see you fly high, sunshine, and it's a beautiful sight!

Very nicely  done, miss!  


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-12-18 11:32 PM


Karilea~
Really nicely written.

'come sky with me'

Ahhhhhhh !  
~*Marge*~

          


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John R
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3 posted 2000-12-18 11:50 PM


I love this stanza. Beautiful!!

Can it be in
this heart of me
to harbor heights
of fantasy
just for we?


If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John


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WONDERFUL!!!!  -SEA

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5 posted 2000-12-19 08:20 AM


I see those harbor heights ...

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Sunshine
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6 posted 2000-12-19 09:59 AM


'Deer, right back at you with a very nice THANKS...

Marge...sometimes I wonder if my play on words has any effect on others...I see that they do...thank you!...

John R., thank you for pointing that out!...

SEA, I'll take those smiling faces and raise you one...

Interloper, glad you play along in the way of words...thank you!...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Wilfred Yeats
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7 posted 2000-12-19 10:06 AM


Your words each day - make my day ~S~ - I love this
Sven
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8 posted 2000-12-19 12:55 PM


  
quote:
         Can it be in
          this heart of me
          to harbor heights
          of fantasy
          just for we?


Indeed it can my friend. . . you only have to dream. . .

Superb from you. . . wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl





[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 12-19-2000).]

Marsha
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9 posted 2000-12-19 02:06 PM


Kari love, does your work have any effect, now that's a toughie?? OH YES IT DOES, comprede mon petit chou, tu et manifique et tu formidable, Ah zut alors mon cheri, tu est manifique.
Well, sometimes french is the only way to reply, Mmmmm don't you agree kid?
I know   I'll be good well goodish!
Take care kid
              Majestic Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Tiersdin
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10 posted 2000-12-19 02:12 PM



Wow! What a wonderful ride upon the wings of love through your words... enjoyed the experience!

*smiles*
-Tier

Sunshine
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11 posted 2000-12-30 07:48 AM


Mr. Yeats, it is SO easy to make you smile...{~,^} thank you for letting me know that I do...

Sven...help, I can't wake up!...LOL...thank you!...

Marsha, I'm going to have to take French all over again, because YES it is a wonderful way to respond! Merci!...

Thank you Tiersdin...

RobertB
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12 posted 2000-12-30 08:36 AM


what an expression of the high from love.


Robert

Denise
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13 posted 2000-12-30 08:55 AM


Harboring heights, such a beautiful thought! This is lovely, Karilea!!

Denise

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