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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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If I If I wake in the dark night and then call out your name Will you turn towards me and re ignite passions flame Will you kiss away the fears that crowd into my head Soothing my soul and comforting me in our lovers bed And gather me into your warmth holding me so tight Will you take my hand and draw me into lovers' delight If I touch you in lovers' special ways that sets you on fire Will you follow my lead and come with me forever higher If I hold out my hand in a simple lovers' plea of my need Will you release this hunger and with lovers fire me feed Will you free me from those demons that roam all around Shining your light and banishing them with loves sound Will your spirit touch mine as together we touch the moon And will I learn anew the marvel of loves wonderful tune If I learn to speak using my mouth to taste and lips to touch Will you make me gasp in delight as I beg for you this much If my lips trail across your chest in tracks of heated desire Will you rise to the challenge and dance again in the fire Will you know what I'm saying when I whisper please release me Smiling secretly as you cut my chains setting us both free Will we dance amongst the stars and set the universe aflame And can after all this my life and my heart ever be the same If I touch you will you know what my hands are asking you Will you answer me with touches that spell out I love you too Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Wow,tssss...that was hot.Full of burning desire,great poem.Thanks. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ WOW Hello! This is wonderful! "If I learn to speak using my mouth to taste and lips to touch Will you make me gasp in delight as I beg for you this much If my lips trail across your chest in tracks of heated desire Will you rise to the challenge and dance again in the fire" I love this!!! Fantabulous!!  -SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful and passionate. Lovely write. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
yes yes i will my love. Oh oh sorry got a little carried away. WOw I need a cold shower now. Great work dear lady friend. love and light, Richard |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!!Wonderful. This is fantastic. Much love to you from me. Oh my gosh the man that wins you will be so blessed. http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/StartimesPoetry.html |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marsha, How wonderfully you do this, and no one could hold a candle to this work. It's already too hot to handle  Keth Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
YES!!! |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Marsha, I think I'm gonna have to make a Marsha folder ...This is so BEAUTIFUL..I think this is my absolute favorite of yours.. ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I should get my wife to read this ... er ... well ... perhaps I'll start her off with something a little cooler |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Marsha, Marsha, my goodness girlie...its a good thing you work in a hospital..you keep writing like this and were gonna need a supply of oxygen. passionate, sensual write ...whew... and yeah...those lines Sea picked... they were the ONES well done jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tony, thank you, Mmmmm, whenever it gets as cold as it is here, I always think that a little heat will warm me nicely. (Or not nicely, divinely ) Circe, thank you love, I was gazing out of the window, and it was a really cold night last night. (I know I should have been working but, I wasn't, well I was but not on what I get paid for. ) I'm quite pleased with this one, and I hope the heat warmed you up a bit. Take care Mushy Poeminister, thank you most kindly, Richard, Mmmm, what did I do? (Just look at the innocent look on my face. Now if I was with my sisters, they'd all run, knowing that is when I'm least innocent.) I promise I am, trust me Although I think a cold shower is a waste of good heat. I wouldn't let it go to waste, if I were you.Take care Mushy Marsha Karen, thank you love, you know I do really appreciate it . Love and hugs to you tooTake care Mushy Marsha Kethry, just streching my wings of fire love. Well I need to grow some to keep up with the Phoenix Now all I have to do is try not to singe anyone Thank you love, and look after yourself. (Remember what I said, because if you don't I'll say it all over again. I know talk the hind leg off the proverbial donkey. 'Deer, yes what? Is that yes please, or some other Yes! Mais qui cheri, si vous plait, m'suir. Vouslez vous avert une grande passion, non comprende pas tout suite avec moi. Je suis avec un grande homme, et n'desiree pas outre homme pour moi. Mmmmm, Et tu comprende moi? I know, me!! I always think it's the only thing french is good for, but then you know the English and the French seem to have a general mistrust of each other. Thank you truly Take care Mushy LL, thank you love, I'm flattered, I truly am. And I'm glad you like it. Take care Mushy Marsha Rex, thank you kindly, and you've been missed here lately, welcome back. Take care Marsha Janet Marie, thank you muchly, I'm immensely flattered. I really am and I truly thank you take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Do I have to tell you I love this one? Simply sensational! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Eagle One, What can I say but thank you, and you know I really am truly thank you. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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