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Forever In the Sun |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Forever In The Sun By Richard Maxfield 6-19-2000 Dancing through the shadows Into pale moon light Spinning through the heavens Mortal bodies taking flight You in my loving arms Forever and a night Two souls as one Two spirits kin Beyond the fairest stars To places no ones been My only lover true My very best of friends Bone on bone Flesh becomes as one We are doing things No lovers have ever done Lost in love’s passion Forever in the sun |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Richard, this is soooooo wonderful, I do like these poems of yours, they are delicious, and de lovely  Really great work, it really is terrific. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
A well done, truly romantic piece my friend. jwesley |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you Sweetheart for your comments. love and light, Richard |
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kindasorta Member
since 2000-12-02
Posts 56 |
Whoah! wake me up and call me silly, how could I have forgotten this one! oh, really romatic and to just dream these lines. nice job.  |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you Kinda for your comment. love and light, Richard |
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