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Fragile sighs Darkened hues
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Fragile sighs Darkened hues |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Beyond the past of somber amethyst sky An angel likeness whispers in fragile sighs There resting upon marble stone Dreaming of a beloved once united in whole Countless echoes of promises were told Unending memories of love gone cold Yearning to flee towards places of healing Her soul now fatigued of its plea concealing The beat of heart now tame in a rhythm Imploring release to obtain some tranquility Surrounding of clouds do comfort her in night Embracing thoughts and dreams of her life Nevermore shall she once again weep Learning to uncage hidden emotions and fears Living each day among sky of pearl and blue Rainbows as path no more darkened hues...  [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-18-2000).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
~ Beyond the past of somber amethyst sky An angel whispers in fragile sighs ~ I love those lines! and the graphic just seems to set the whole thing off. I like.  "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
This is exquisite. Thank you for posting this. One thing you have a typo in the last line of the second stanza(it's) should be its. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh coco this is a most beautiful piece..well done sweetie ~HUG~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
 oh Coco....this is a precious piece...wonderful written my friend. Charisma |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
EAGLE, ya sweetie you...thanks for stopping by and I'm smiling cus you like JOHN, thank you kindly for the correction I often make a slip on the it's and its and I'm pleased you liked it also TRACIE...((((gurl)))) so glad 2 see you again and I'm tickled purple you enjoyed this poem hugs2Usweetie coco |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
CHARISMA, sweetie you snuck in there on me just when I was about to go 2 bed... I love your snowglobe such a treasure you place here... And I'm delighted you stopped by to take a peak... Hugs2uPoetFriend coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-18-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Dani~ This piece sighs so softly. Beautifully created. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I just simply loved this Coco...beautiful. And more so on the third read. jwesley and by the way...send me an email on how to include the picture if you would. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I love this. Beautifully done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
MARGE->you know the heart and mind work's in mysterious ways when at night one rests upon cotton sheets and something I have learned recently is the more heartache one is feeling the closer you are to its breath of release... Hugs2Ualways JW-> thank you for the '3rd' time ya know sweetie you're too kind... And I'll email you the scoop on graphic embedding POE->hiya PoetFriend, thank you for the response you give it's warming to my heart to know these verses are enjoyed... coco |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Coco, The imagery here is fabulous!! I loved this one. So full of love and remembrance. Nice writing my friend. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Beyond the past of somber amethyst sky An angel likeness whispers in fragile sighs There resting upon marble stone Dreaming of a beloved once united in whole ================== The beat of heart now tame in a rhythm Imploring release to obtain some tranquility Surrounding of clouds do comfort her in night Embracing thoughts and dreams of her life =================== Coco this is stunning...enchanting ... my goodness this is lovely .. your pen has been on fire of late!! wonderful imagery ...just beautiful love that picture...thats one of my favs later-angel-gator jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yet another of yours to go into my library. I don't know what you have been eating lately but I WANT SOME. Or maybe you found the magical golden pen of poetry...which is it my friend? This is just lovely and your growth as of late is remarkable and headed toward beyond superb. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
LW->thank you sweetie it's so nice to have you drop in and read the lil rhymes of heart I write...hugs2U JM->your spirit and kindness just makes me smile and me hopes you know that all the time... Mark->now now you CowboyPoet over there You make me blush so pink on cheek and even got me to shed a tear... And on a more serious note, I so much appreciate that you take the time to share with me your thoughts ya know you're a gem of a friend thank you |
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