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Lesson Dearly Learned
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Lesson Dearly Learned |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Lesson Dearly learned Karen Torbiak 2000 I learn and weep for loss of fantasy in a life denied the softness that love could supply Lessons taught acceptance understood by a pain filled woman being foolish to believe I know my role, I been taught that for this one love is not to be apart of her reality So into fantasy where pain cannot touch or harm will I forever hold a heart that is not wanted by men of earth I fly and give joy and love wherever wanted fulfilling my call with gentleness to never open a heart afraid as rejection is accepted eternally Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Startime, I can feel and relate in some sense to the pain that fills this poem, and I just want to say don't give up hope, there is someone wonderful waiting for you, I know it can lonely and the loneliness is never easy, but be strong and believe in yourself. Your heart will find love, I am sure. well written poem, thank you for sharing. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Poignantly told, and I wish you sunlit days and warm nights! Corinne |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karen, one day love, you will find true love waiting just for you, I know you will. Hope and dreams, the most treasured gifts that love gives, and it will be there. This is a terrific poem, and you have a loving heart, and it shows love it really does show. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wow.....so heart breaking......love is out there, he'll find you........  -SEA |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Dear friend this clawed at my heart. good writing. love and light, Richard |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Love will come, of that I have no doubt. Seeing and accepting it when it does, for what it is, is sometimes harder to see. Meanwhile, we accept, and enjoy the sharing of ourselves with others, until it appears in a way we understand. Well written. jwesley |
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