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Presence of a Prayer
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Presence of a Prayer |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Have you never felt it there in the silence of aware upon the neck - antennae hair – profound presence of a prayer (someone loves me) sends me greet oil poured, most savory, upon my unbecoming feet Someone’s out there. Someone cares. Knowledge speaks within the night yanking blanket of despair-- someone prayed for me tonight. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
It was Me!!!! I love this ......excellent!!!  -SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you're welcome. . . now, if I could only have someone return the favor. . . wonderful my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Have you never felt it there in the silence of aware upon the neck - antennae hair – profound presence of a prayer ============ yes..I have ... and the same thing happens when I read your poetry too *winkiewinkie* me loves ya me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Janet, Sven and Sea... I thank you much gratefully, did not mean to "flood" the forum with me, but it just sort of came spilling out t'nite. Wanted to thank you, hand-over-heart, this is the one that I wish to sleep by t'nite...loving smiling hugs to you!!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~HUGS~ seren Prayers for you anytime Love ya Tracie~ P.S Beautiful thoughts fill this poem...well done Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Each day when I arise before I brush the sleep from my eyes I take the time to whisper a prayer for all my friends And as the day goes on I feel a presence lingering on my shoulder with thoughts another has sent my way ... It is the way of friends. HUGS, honey, for this beauty ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful my friend, my son loved it too. jwesley |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serenity--a treasure of a poem! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
serenity, you can flood the forum with you anytime. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Clapping bravo!! I loved it great work here. Love and light, Richard |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Tracie, Marge, Martie, Sven, Richard, and jwesley...thank you much...you've got my gratitude...and my prayers! |
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