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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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Your eyes whispered to me from across the room I could feel their weight and heat even before I looked in your direction and when I did.........my heart skiped a beat The breath that I was taking ~ froze then melted........along with the rest of me onto the floor.........a puddled mass of tingling nerves I watched you smile and mouth the words "hi baby" The kids were running crazy......tv blaring....... dog barking......our frontroom a complete zoo you were enjoying it all, and while I was getting the dishes done I fell in love, all over again, with you. ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
we love ya in love sea-girlie ... how could we not?? what a sweet read this is.. sincere and precious later-falling again-gator  jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Good! Good writing, good thought, good event! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
very good dear friend. I loved the feel of this. Big sigh. Good writing. Love and light, Richard |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
SEA, this is fantastic. I melted to the floor reading this..... knowing that exact same feeling that makes us melt and our hearts skip a beat. Great expression....it pulled me right in. Love the last line....it really says it all!  ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hey there, Little SEA~ Gal- LOVE THE PIC ! The poem says wonders ! *wink* Give that hubby a *hug* from me ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, didn't I say you'd look stunning in a burlap sack  . Wonderful joyous delightful poem, I love this one I really do. Oh how delicious and divine this is. I love it, I truly do. (And I can see exactly why he fell in love with you love. )Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautiful images Sea..and a lovely pic too ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SweetSEA of beauty at the shore your roar we hear, of passionate tides I love your poem. Excellent writing... take care, Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What a sweet slice of American pie!!! Left me misty eyed, SEA...you've drawn us quite a lovely portrait here. I enjoyed this immensely! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh yes......can imagine how nice this welcome is.....warm.....and with lot of love. you've penned it with a warm heart my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Loved this one and the pic also, what a lovely young lady you are! "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Wonderful write! Cupid got you again! Happy for you I hope somebody someday falls in love when there doing my dishes! LOL |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Always sweet words to hear...James |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
What a beautiful picture of love, occurring just about anywhere! Great write! I really enjoyed this! sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet~ With a husband like mine...I live in love thank you Interloper~ thanks Richard~ thank you for the big sigh Sheri~ thanks, some how I knew you could relate Marge~ thank you for everything.......  I told Jon you sent him a hug and he said right back at ya! Mushy~ you are just too sweet to me! Thank you Victoria~ Thank you so much! PM~ aren't you sweet! Thank youSerenity~ just a typical day at my house..things are always crazy..... thank you Charisma~ I like to think we are warm and welcoming and full of love........thank you Irish Rose~ you're making me blush!! Thank you so much!! Insect~ I have no doubts someone will for you sweetie..... James~ thanks sweet friend Snowpants~ thank you -SEA |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Back to the top you go sweet SEA.. The words of someone so much in love..Made me smile again, as usual... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LL~ aren't you sweet......... thank you! -SEA |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i read and i sighed and i thank you for sharing this lovely tender moment |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
You are truly blessed. Love like that doesn't come around that often. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful, tender and real, sea...can't get any better then that..thanks for sharing such a sweet moment. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
SEA, very nice very loving, but I have one question.... whoooo's the sweety in the picture... I hope its your single sister... wowser . Parker |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SEA, awwwwwwwww this is soooooooo sweet to think you took a moment to write a poem about a day within your home shared with spouse and children... This tickles my heart ya know that eh sweetie... coco |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kaile~ thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked this John~ thank you, I feel blessed Martie~ thank youParker~ Hey handsome, thanks and nope sorry, that's just me....... -SEA |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Opps! sorry Coco, I didn't mean to miss you.....thank you....... I had wonderful inspiration -SEA |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! I do like this, a special one I think! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Aw SEA that's the spirit! Great poem! But you know he's a lucky guy to have such a nice girl! Because I can tell by this picture that you're a cute little doll...so mix that with the heart you display here at Passions and yep...he's lucky...I wish you the best of holiday seasons...take care...ethome |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very lovely poem my friend and as usual I am so happy to see you so much in love and ENVIOUS of your hubby that he captured your heart. Now as I said on the other poem..........that picture has got me dreaming things that even make me blush, but believe me, you have lots of fun in them. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Eagle One~ thank you very much Ethome~ I think I'm lucky too! thanksMark~  what do I say to that?! Hugs friend -SEA |
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