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Roaming [Since 1968]from my personal archives |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Roaming (Since 1968) If there were a way that I could make him understand that my love for him grows ~ but he's so much in demand other girls surely love him too I'm not the only one, What is there for me to do? yet I can't leave this undone! Roaming about in this world setting his sails for the sky leaving behind another girl saying his last goodbye If there were a way that I could make him want to stay I'd gladly do all that I could if I knew that indeed he would; I love to watch him slowly smile his laughter echoes in the air; but he'll travel many miles leaving time lonely and bare. Roaming about in this world setting his sails for the sky leaving behind another girl saying his last goodbye When he leaves me I'll surely cry tears will come, fast and sure My love for him is so very real yet he's on his worldly tour ~ He'll leave me fast and all alone in a place that calls for him. But only echoes of my cries will answer, barren and within. Roaming about in this world setting his sails for the sky leaving behind another girl saying his last goodbye circa 1968 < !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A very lyrical quality here, sunshine....reads like a song. Funny how so many of those world tours lead one right back home....where one should have been all along. I like this one very much  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
OH MY GOD......HOW GLORIOUS.....THANK YOU FOR THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S MY BEACH... "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this is absolutely wonderful, bring out some more love, these are excellant. Oh how good are you utterly amazing. Gooooo Kari Goooooo. I'm waving my little flag and sending you lots of cheers. You see, this is what I was saying, this is a first class example. You've always had talent in abundance, and this proves it. Fabulous work fantastic picture, and it's wonderful Take care kid  Majestic Marsha (The innocent one  )< !signature--> Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hmmmmmmmmm. 1968. Now that was a good year and this is good writing. It also shows how far your capabilities have grown and how your work has matured. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this is the second time I've replied to this, but if the other one returns from wither it is lost, then fine. This is absolutely fabulous, I love this one I really do. It's wonderful, brilliant piece, beautiful piccy, and it's completely marvellous. And this is a perfect example of what I was saying, you have always had talent in abundance, it is here, clearly showing through. No wonder your work is superior, and it is don't argue. (Bring out some of your others Kari, you know I can never have too many. Ever!) Take care Kid Majestic Marsha (With just a hint of scamp) Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
roaming around. . . and I found this!!! how wonderful. . . made the trip all worth while. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Let's see... 1968... spending every possible minute at the beach... moved away.. had a family.... came back... 2000... spending every possible minute at the beach... Now THAT sounds about right... Nice one, K..  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
1968........two years before I was born........The year my husband was born.......   This very much reads like a song.........wonderful!!! -SEA |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Another keeper. I love this one! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Deer...thank you...indeed I was always listening to music so that you've picked up the "lyrical quality" is pleasing..."round and round we go..." {~,^} Irish, is it really? Wonderful!... Marsha, I see the glitter and gleam on that flag of yours...thank you!...{~,^} Interloper...I was 16 when I wrote this...just before my senior year...just getting over being extremely shy and had just quit my stuttering...I'm glad you see the growth... Marsha, times two you!...hugs, Sven...short trip...LOL...thank you... Nan...landlocked now...perhaps a beach or two in my future...but in the summer, I indeed have "waves"...LOL... SEA, thank you for showing me my gray hair...where's that box of coloring?... Thank you Elizabeth...I've kept it for a long time... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--You were very talented at such an early age...and still are...more! |
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