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Winter Wings (Tanka)
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Winter Wings (Tanka) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Winter Wings Bright angels do fly with white snowy winter wings through stratums above and down the sky soft snow falls off their feathers to the earth [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful imagery in this one. Now would you mind sending some this way so that I may see those wings for a bit. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Excellent imagery and I love the angel theme!  Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
loved it... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Don't get snow here but you have lent me the feel of the snow through this poem Thanks Rich |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Thank you all for your kind comments. I changed my poem a bit --I noticed I had too few sylllables at first, hope its officially a tanka now, thank you again for reading... take care Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful all around image of snow falling off the wings of angels like feathers... I really like it! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful imagery.......great tanka. Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ Ahhhhhhhhh ! Lovely ! Perfectly done Tanka. A pleasure to read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
ethome--Hello. Thank you for your comments and for reading. Charisma--Thanks. Glad you enjoyed. Marge --Glad you liked. Thanks for your kind comments. Take care, Poeminister |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
very nice image...very nice tanka...keep up the good work  |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oh i do love this...! nice work hugs, g "the beginning of wisdom is, 'i do not know'" -unknown |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
PM~ This makes me wish for snow......we have it all around us........what a beautiful Tanka!! -SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
kaile--Hello. thank you for your comments and encouragement. fallen rain--Nice to meet. Glad you enjoyed. SEA--Thank you Poeminister |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
Ejoyed the alliteration in this. well written If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
John R-- Thank you for your comments and reading. Glad you enjoyed. |
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