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Sway Slowly, Feel The Music
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Sway Slowly, Feel The Music |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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Sway Slowly, Feel The Music Sway slowly, feel the music, close your eyes hear the song, come with me, follow my steps, listen and see, feel the love, the love, the love, I give to thee. Sit upon good mother earth, touch her heart beneath your hand; grasp my fingers, feel the throb My Heart emits, when I hold your hand. See and feel, flow with the wind, revel in the warmth of what I give; take it and run, leap and catch a cloud, tumble to earth, lay upon the ground, close your eyes, smile so deep… feel what I know, when thinking of you. Know that I love, with the glow that comes just after it rains, with all the starlight that's ever been, and I want to love, and adore you, with all of my life. I want to watch leaves fall, winter come, spring wash it away, summer languish with it's lazy days… I want to live every day, every day of my life, with you. So sway slowly, feel the music, close your eyes hear the song, come with me, follow my steps, listen and see, feel the love, the love, the love, I give to thee. w. james beard, jr. © December 2000 [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 12-16-2000).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
James, Beautiful wishes from the heart. i hope you plea was heard.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now that was one sweet dance through a heart obviously ready for love. Wonderful read my friend. Keep them coming. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
love is a wonderful thing aye...  and i especially love this part.. "See and feel, flow with the wind, revel in the warmth of what I give; take it and run, leap and catch a cloud, tumble to earth, lay upon the ground, close your eyes, smile so deep… feel what I know, when thinking of you." take it and run......  gotta love LOVE! hugs, fallen |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ Caught me in the sway of you - you did ! 'Know that I love, with the glow that comes just after it rains' I know that glow - this is WONDERFUL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
The poems that you have posted within the past few days have highly impressed me, I am really starting to take notice when I see your name now! Your poetry is a breath of fresh air, I am sorry that I never noticed you as much before. This was absolutely beautiful, I love your words of love and childlike fervor throughout! The music theme is a perfect comparison, music much like love can touch the soul so deeply and take it to new heights. You really do have a creative and peaceful ways with words in this piece. *sigh* a perfect beginning and ending - very effective to repeat the main point! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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