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Love Letters |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
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In the slumber of darkness when all is still only the fragrance.. a sleeping daffodil i hear whispers echoing in the night love letters written in sands of moonlight envelope of the night sealed by oceans kiss tucked away taken below in the ocean of abyss although lovers have died so very long ago hearts still ache for someone they use to know upon the shores of a thousand years past ribbons of tears wrapped around the winds mast footprints embedded upon salt kissed shores shadows searching for the love they adored lost within mysteries of love and grains of sand a shadow reaching ..reaching for someones hand < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* how incredibly beautiful is this wonderful poem. It touches the heart and soul. Someone surely will reach out to take the offered hand. Much love to you from me. http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/index.html |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautiful poem, lovely images. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
ghosts of loving /lovers - on salt kissed sand - wonderful images Victoria - I loved this |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
startime..thank you so much..im so happy you enjoyed..thank your for reading..  brian..thank you for peeking in glad you likedbill..thank you very much..nice to hear from you ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well this one was simple lovely through and trough. It brought back the visions of the movie "Message In A Bottle" to me for some reason. Very tenderly written and much enjoyed. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
loved the read. it was very dream like. Great job love and light, Richard |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'i hear whispers echoing in the night love letters written in sands of moonlight' Absolutely beautiful, Victoria! Love it!! sp 'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"hearts still ache for someone they used to know" beautiful Victoria. . . captures some feelings I have tonight. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh yes, this is beatuiful, and so well captures a mood. Too well, maybe.. Love it Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you mark..always so nice to hear from you Richard..thank you so much..glad you liked snowpants..thanks for peeking in ...appreciate your nice comments Sandra..thank you hon..HUGS ~Victoria~ < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
Yes! Dreams of love either lost or longed for, are like footprints in the sand. The waves like ripples of the past lap the time-washed shores of unforgotten memories. I morn such a love. I enjoyed this poem it echoes my feelings. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful images to suit the title ... I enjoyed the read very much! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I like the "sands of moonlight". That is way cool! Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Victoria, May I use this in the Passions Digital Newsletter, I'm doing an article for the Valentine's Day edition entitled "Love Letters" please, oh please, it's perfect, absolutely perfect....e mail me if you like.....< !signature--> "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
John..thank you ..yes i think most have suffered from broken hearts at one time or another...thank you for taking time to read ethome..nice to hear from you as always Robert..thank you for peeking in kathleen..im happy you enjoyed and happy that you can use it in the letter HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely imagery and writing. Nicely done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you so much poeminister..appreciate you peeking in today.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
footprints embedded upon salt kissed shores shadows searching for the love they adored ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~wonderful lines.....love the whole poem. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Victoria~ this is so Beautiful......I loved the imagery...... -SEA |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you very much charisma and sea..so glad you enjoyed ...appreciate you kind comments..HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
"envelope of the night sealed by oceans kiss tucked away taken below in the ocean of abyss" have always found your words with such beauty in them....you really have a beautiful talent... Greeneyes *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very nice of you to say..i enjoyed writing this one..thank you for reading ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Victoria, I am so glad I did not miss this one, this is true poerty, simply beautiful wow amazing, I loved it thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
This is beautiful... Lovely..lovely...lovely... I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you cerenity and breathe..i appreciate your sweet comments... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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