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ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
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0 posted 2000-12-16 04:50 PM


year

i in winter differs
from i in fall(ing)
after a suddenly summer
as i in spring ends
and the daffodils
lose their splendor


m.a. miller
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© Copyright 2000 ma miller - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-12-16 04:59 PM


Yes, yes it does, my friend.

So glad to see you again. Have missed you.

Looking forward to many more....years and posts...but hey? the years thing? is subject to change according to my mood.

grins to see ya again, M.A.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
2 posted 2000-12-16 05:03 PM


I enjoyed this. Everything changes and each new season can bring us all a sense of renewal. Much love to you from me.
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brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
3 posted 2000-12-16 06:34 PM


a beautiful piece, short and sweet.  

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
4 posted 2000-12-16 11:36 PM


Mark...its so good to see you gracing these pages again my friend..and with such a great piece too...welcome home
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2000-12-17 02:42 AM


Wonderful little write MA good to see you again!
ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

6 posted 2000-12-17 11:26 AM


hello Passions' poets ... thought i'd drop by and leave a short piece to ponder ... thanks to all for reading ... hope to get back to Passions sometime soon ...
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