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my imagination |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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Is it my imagination < !signature-->or is it my eyes does it matter do I have the time to float on ocean tides writing' single stanza lines too wrapped in dreams I should’ve changed if I knew what blue wasn’t ‘ntill the playin’ cards were laced down laying as solitaire no one knows names or cares rather restin’ easy but then e’er pressing onward just to hope it fades I’ll be up ‘til dawn when spells are broke to rising suns but I'd rather be on beaches waves preface I can’t elucidate being trapped by her sea scene shells and how the ocean ne’er seems changes so much how she’s so gotten broken with the rolling swells her mood is like a wanderin’ moon strolling yonder sky e’er changing to a ‘nother... daz of tides then I cry . Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. ~Marge Tindal~ [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 12-16-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ And on the sunrise of your sighs I will catch your tears. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Your words "if I knew what blue wasn't" just tear up my heart. Beautifully worded poem, my blue darling. I love the interwoven imagery of the ocean and the emotions, and the reality of spells being broken by the dawn ... |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
thanks, dale |
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kindasorta Member
since 2000-12-02
Posts 56 |
don't worry, this sea of blue choses the same as you. same thoughts i repeat as if my own. you have spoken well within, stay true to these words, would you? agree with you, your words of here, now lets move on to your next rhyme and see what words appear. ditto, ditto this lovely song. |
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