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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-12-16 12:37 PM




scintilla of word
alighting a remembrance
and senses careen

scintillating wit
karmic in measure of time
nuclear action

sundog halos reign
incandescent buoyancy
circling with passion

fetter not the light
but praise the scintillation
with all that loves life


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Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ





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Kethry
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1 posted 2000-12-16 03:19 AM


Hon,
I'm so proud of you. This is just brilliant both the graphic and the write
Be real and feel
Keth


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Marsha
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2 posted 2000-12-16 06:25 AM


Kari love, this is so beautiful, a truly awesome piece. The picture is utterly beautiful, and as for the poem what can I say, it is shimmering, and glowing incandescently. This is superb work, it really is.
Love it I really truly do
take care
                  Majestic Mushy Marsha
                              
                               

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-12-16 03:05 PM


Kethry, thank you...that you look in to read and enjoy means much...

Marsha, isn't this a fun graphic...? Now that I've finally gotten the hang of this...it makes my mind expand in what I might come up with...wheee!


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Sven
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4 posted 2000-12-16 11:02 PM


superbly scintillating Sunshine!!

so supreme. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-12-16 11:17 PM


Sven, so glad you liked...thank you!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Sven
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6 posted 2000-12-16 11:18 PM


surely someone should see something satisfying somewhere. . . .

  LOL

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That which gives light must endure burning
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ethome
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7 posted 2000-12-17 03:21 AM


Beautiful there kid! These are flowing out of the old poetic fountain like crazy lately ... keep'em comin they're very very well done!!

Love that scene!

Sunshine
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8 posted 2000-12-17 07:23 AM


Ethome, sometimes it seems like the flow is against the tide, but...oh well...thank you my friend...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Poeminister
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9 posted 2000-12-17 08:28 PM


Sunshine,
I love these all. And the picture too. Beautifully done.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe


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10 posted 2000-12-17 08:33 PM


"share the scintillation"

what a wonderfuf phrase that says so much!

Thank you, sunshine  

Sunshine
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11 posted 2000-12-17 11:45 PM


Poeminister, thank you, so very glad you liked it...

'Deer, three smiley faces? Do you have a grading scale? Is that a "C"? LOL...couldn't help it...thank you!


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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