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Loving You........
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Loving You........ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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I find it so appealing This feel that I'm feeling As thoughts of you come slowly into view It makes my world so bright now Makes everything so right now This feeling that I get from loving you. I really feel blessed now Although I get no rest now My heartbeat goes a hundred miles or two My body takes a lickin' As pulse begins to quicken And all this from the thought of loving you. Seems life is so worthwhile now I always wear a smile now A testament to magic that you do. I feel so much elation From this brand new sensation That comes to me because of loving you. I find it no surprise now This twinkle in my eyes now I'm sure I've never seen them quite so blue. The irises are glowing From all the love they're showing Just from the simple act of loving you. How do you do this thing, dear That makes my heart sing so clear Not even Pavarotti could outdo? My soul turns operatic Because I'm so ecstatic From music that comes out from loving you. The birds and bees are active Because you're so attractive This wild desire is so completely new. My hormones rage like widlfire And nerves are strung like taut wire By thinking of the thought of loving you. Sun never shone so brightly Moon bathes me with glow nightly This warrior has reached his Waterloo. My flag flies in surrender As I bow to your gender And thank God for the joy of loving you. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
~Balladeer~ I LOVE YOU TOO!! What?! Oh, not for me........ Darn......  Beautiful like a song ~SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ The very thought of you in surrender causes my heart to melt so tender But the thing that gets my heart really ticking is the thought of your body taking a lickin'   And just where might one apply for that job ??  Love n' hugs n' squeezes~ Oh, yeah ... you distracted me for a minute there ... I did want to say - Great romanticism here ! Love you~ ~*Little Waterloo*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I said it before--and I say it again---Yer a lovely man..and yer lady? Is a lucky, lucky, lady.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
loving you in love ... is such an easy thing to do you send our hearts and minds reeling when you pen your heart's devotion so true  oh yeah..this one definatly goes in the ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis file. latercupid-got-ya-good-gator jm |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I think I'm gonna smile now, Or maybe I'll just sigh now, Such warm and fuzzy sentiments you blend; 'Tis such a sweet rendition, Of love's pure adoration, In all these lovely thoughts that you have penned. My goodness Michael ... your sentiments are just simply wonderful. Your heart is just leaping off the page these days. Loved this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Somehow I think Rodgers & Hammerstein would recruit you just for this... you've got it bad, 'Deer, and it isn't even spring... I have to agree with the rest of the ladies... she's one lucky one... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
'Deer. It's not love,... it's indigestion,... or a hormone imbalance,... or a mid life crisis, or...ssc syndrome, or... Anyway as long as you're enjoying it...Write on Keth Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Hearts beating way too fast Lights twinkling in your eyes Glowing at night Your flag is surrendering?????????? Ok Deer I think you may be having a heart attack with a touch of radioactivity. Take an asprin and call the Doctor (Toerag) come first light. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Verse like this makes anyone feel like a teenager again (in love) beautiful.....thank you for sharing this with us! "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Balladeer--Happiness shines from your pen...so brightly...and I'm glad! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
SEA...Who was that in the background saying it's not for you?!?! Oh,...hubby.  Just smile and agree with him for now, ok? Marge....l'il Waterloo?!!? ROTFLMAO!!!! Marge, you're the greatest!! I know when I'm licked!!...or, at least I would.... Your comments are golden, m'dear. You make this place so much fun! (you know where to apply )serenity...and yer a sweetie yerself...thank you !! JM....I love you loving it when I love writin' about loving love...you're lovely (and very pretty )Kit...thank you, my girl Life is short...let's be happy sunshine...it's spring in Florida!! I never have it bad...I always have it good! Who's Rodgers and Hammerstein??? Kethry.....mid-life crisis gets my vote! I better enjoy it while I can....thank you, my friend inot2B....call Toerag?? Can I choose the heart attack instead?????  Rose....that;s what it's for...to create a nice, happy feeling! I I'm glad it works for you! Martie...I'm SO glad you're glad! Thank you, flower girl of my heart |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh*.......*sigh*.....oh my you are so.....mmmmmmmmmm romantic....love this wonderful lovely piece. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I agree with all the other ladies here. This is beautifully, romantic. She is a lucky lady to have such a romantic man in her life. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ah Balladeer, beautifully romantic words from the romantics pen. Isn't love grande?? Well done... On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. ~me~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it deery..and the form very much < !signature-->will you be my baby? no ifs buts or maybes i will surrender to you come hide away with me and you will surely see bedroom of my eyes..blue ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-16-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
'Deer, it's fabulous, this is truly par excellance, (French being the language of love Mmmm!) Monsieur Balladeer, a zut alors tres bon, n'est pas, vous avec une grande passion, je suis comprende la tout. Monsieur 'Deer avec une junne fille Pardon m'sieur you've not paid the bill Pour amour avec la tout soir Return tout suite you'll not get far I'm sure m'sieur comprende this Because 'Deer she waiting pour vous kiss  :Love this, excellant Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
a true Balladeer - you sure have a flair for the style - I loved the way you did this |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
well (to repeat myself... lol... i think.. hehe).... if... "love is love is love is love is love"... like some great unknown poet once said... (rofl... moi! *grin) and if... "you can't always get what you want, but if you try some time, you'll get what you need" as some great well known 20th century philosopher and lyricist said... then... awww geez... what was the conclusion? is there ANY logic here? i was trying to present this comment logically, as an "if this, then that" with really strong truths at the end... *sighsighsigh*... but .... ahhhhhh .,.... oh well.... i'm just gonna go get my bow and shoot it or wrap it around me or something and say a great cheer to the christmas tree and the poet's feast which i wish i had ... yum.. so.... all this to say... Great Poem, Michael! - and oh, how musing it is to me...... in a manner of poetic speaking... *sigh*.... i LOVE it!! (((hug)))and here's #810... oh? you only wanted 700? lol *wink*... ohhhhh well....... ok, finally, i figured out what to say... here it is... *smooch* [This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 12-16-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well I thought after the last one that you had it bad but now I KNOW for sure that you are smitten. Beautiful piece my friend and I must say even to this cowboy's eyes, YOU look good IN LOVE and you sure as heck pen it with a masterful style and flair. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Charisma....always good to get a compliment from another romantic Startime... I KNOW you are an incredible romantic!!! Thank you, my friend Gentle Spirit...yes, it can be.... Thank you!Victoria...thank you! I like your words - and your form - very much, too! Marsha....Wow! I'm gonna have to get that translated and get back to you! Sounds beautiful...and I DO understand the last line. I thank you, mon cheri.. Bill....thank you...you do very well in the flair dept yourself.... Doreen....LOL!!! well, that was a ong and winding road to get to that smooch...thank you Mark....thank you, cowboy!! Yep, roped, tied and branded....and headed for the slaughterhouse...loving the ride |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Gosh, I can't think of anything to say that hasn't already been said... This is so sweetly penned..absoultely loved it , I did.. going to the shelf also... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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