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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road 
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funny how it is lost an old dream and new ones so hard to find looking from this window onto a dark night same world but cruel now remember that window curtain flowing when i was ten late night and a new world was a friend now dark is just that dark and cold and a business world feels like to cut my dream [This message has been edited by allan (edited 12-15-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"you've got a friend..." (with acknowledgement due to the most UN-deva...Carole King... "when you're down and troubled and you need some love and care, and nothing, no, nothing is going right... close your eyes and think of me and soon I will be there to brighten up even your darkest night..." and even more lovely is HER story of how this was written..she said this one? just "fell down thru the ceiling..." and to this day, she swears, that it was not written BY her, but THROUGH her... with love and laughter to you m'friend...glad that you are home again..HUGS |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Thanks Serenity, You're quote from Carole King is just right for my mood... I love her early songs so much - Tapestry being just a total masterpiece... I appreciate your sentiments very much.  [This message has been edited by allan (edited 12-16-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
allan..so good to see your name in the forums!..i havent seen you in a while..have i been missing you somewhere??? "funny how it is lost an old dream and new ones so hard to find..." so true... as always, a masterpiece from your pen..i love this..and the way i can feel every line as if it were my own..very nice write my friend and tapestry...ah..gotta love that one! used to go to sleep listening to carole king, james taylor, cat stevens....i was a little thing..but the love of the music stays with me hugs, g "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, the windows stay the same, and the trees and everything else, but we change and we see the same things but they affect us so differently. I enjoyed this, took me back... "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Thank you both very much! yes, I've written nothing except the last few here for months and months! I almost believed I'd written my last. But, for better or worse it seems like there are one or two more in here. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I'm so glad that there is more,...I enjoy reading you. *Peace. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Hi Allan.... Don't let anyone or anything "cut" your dreams. I felt much saddness and frustration flowing from this piece. So for that I send HUGS! "Irie's Wish" is for you too < !signature--> ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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