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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia

0 posted 2000-12-15 08:12 PM


Wisdom flows from his pen
In conundrum and in rhyme
His sense of humor sometimes Zen
But makes pure poetry shine

Writing words that taunt and tease
Causing all to think
Painting starker truths with ease
From which he will not shrink

Truth is felt in light and dark
He has the wit to see
That the weave of sun and lark
Is sometimes caught in poetry

More oft times his truth foretelling
With gentleness and care
Soft of voice with passion swelling
Revealed to those "out there"

See the flow across the page
Of life the warp and weft
Sharing knowledge through the age
Wise footprints he has left

And as his moves to a new age
The poems from his pen
Reveal the heart of a sage
Who has learned to love again.



Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


© Copyright 2000 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
1 posted 2000-12-15 08:20 PM


Kethry love, do you need me to tell you this is utterly spot on, no I know you don't, but I will because it is. Do you follow, yes I know you do one of the few who can!!
Love this one love, I really do.
(Francessca, sends her love and her deepest thanks. She has pinned it up in her office and sent it all over the place. She's in banking dear heart.) I didn't say she was, she just works for one.  
Take care love
              Slushy mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2000-12-15 10:37 PM


Very nice tribute to Sudhir! He is without a doubt a gentleman and a fine poet and I have enjoyed reading his works during the time I've been here at Passions ... good job here Kethry!!
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2000-12-19 02:09 AM


Thanks Marsha and ethome. He is a gem isn't he.
Be well
Kethry.


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-12-19 02:29 AM


He truely is all that you say and much much more.   I have been a huge fan of his since joining Passions and I can think of no better way to honor him than how you just did.  Wonderful write my friend and I applaud you for your wonderful heart and seeing him in the real light that he truely is.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
5 posted 2000-12-19 06:35 AM


Mark,
why thank you kind sir, but the credit goes to Sudhir who showed his face so clearly all I had to do was join the dots.
Be well
Kethry.


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
6 posted 2001-01-06 10:26 PM


So spot on Keth, this is our Sudhir...wonderful write
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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