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Charisma
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0 posted 2000-12-15 08:26 AM






Eternity snow
serene blanket of mountains
hidden glaciers groove



[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 12-15-2000).]

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SEA
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Love this   and the picture you have with it is perfect!   -SEA
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2 posted 2000-12-15 07:35 PM


SEA: I'm glad that you liked it....  

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3 posted 2000-12-15 07:40 PM


Charisma, this is so beautiful, and just wonderful. I love it, I really do.
Take care
                Mushy
                  


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Only a memory of the same
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4 posted 2000-12-15 09:30 PM


Charisma,

Lovely haiku my friend.  Fabulous picture . . . the perfect combination.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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5 posted 2000-12-15 09:32 PM


Beautifully descriptive Haiku Charisma ... and what a superb picture to compliment these lovely words ... perfect!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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6 posted 2000-12-16 06:48 PM


Marsha: I am so glad that you love this haiku....and thank you for stopping by to read and reply.

LW: thank you for your kind words, and I appreciate your comment very much.

Kit: thank you, for this wonderful reply....

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7 posted 2000-12-18 01:28 AM


Lovely haiku.  Very nicely done.

Poeminister

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yep! I love it too.  

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9 posted 2000-12-18 02:48 AM


You're just getting so darn good at this style...loved the graphic too!! take care... ethome
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Beautiful haiku my friend and the graphic was perfect to go with this one.  Hugs to you and happy holidays in case I miss ya later

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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11 posted 2000-12-18 07:17 AM


poeminister: thank you for your nice comment  

EagleOne: I am glad that you love ittoo, my friend.  

ethome: thank you for the compliment, its always nice to have them from you.

Mark: thank you my friend, for your comment and Merry Christmas for you and your family too.
(((hugs))) back at ya



[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 12-18-2000).]

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12 posted 2000-12-18 12:26 PM


they say a picture speaks a thousand words but mi think your haiku speaks of its picture!

nicely done

Charisma
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13 posted 2000-12-19 09:02 AM


Kaile :  thank you for your lovely compliment....I am glad that you liked it.
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14 posted 2000-12-19 09:54 AM


Lovely haiku....but COLD. Oh, so cold.

INclan

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15 posted 2000-12-19 01:11 PM


Beautiful picture and lovely words for it Charisma!

Nathan

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16 posted 2001-01-03 04:17 PM


INclan: I am glad that you like the haiky...and yeah it is a cold one.

Nate dog: thank you for your kind reply...glad that you enjoy it too.

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