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slipknot
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 25


0 posted 2000-12-15 04:56 AM


Your long blonde hair
and sparkling blue eyes
I've never seen you like this before
we've just been friends
I connected deeper with you
I understood and felt your pain
I want to help you
to make the hurt feel better
I want you to help me
teach me how to trust again
how to be loved
to hold me in your arms
you don't see me
you don't see me
you don't see me
not like that
and probably never will
we'll remain just friends
while still wanting and longing
until the very end

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brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
1 posted 2000-12-16 03:26 PM


oh I know this feeling, always tough, but trust me true love does come along.   really enjoyed the poem. Who knows maybe one day something might happen and you may become more than friends.
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"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith


[This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 12-16-2000).]

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