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Michael G
Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-12-15 01:52 AM


I hear the music begin
as some far off solution
to my madness and dreams
confirms the obliteration
that some have wished
upon my soul.
So what of you,
that single faint gasp
you potray to have
all the answers
and yet none that come
to a mind less fruitfull.
You know, the music
is my home, my life
the words the way I sing
to a world that fails
itself, it's heart
and you think your so right.
So for the last time,
take your anger, your petty attitude
and put it back
into your own soul
because I'll tell you what,
mine is doing just fine.

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-12-15 03:43 PM


Yes siree!! and take that!! I love the rebuttal and the defence. The title just sets it all off...good writing!!
Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
2 posted 2000-12-15 03:47 PM


Oh my gosh, very powerful. BRAVO!!!Well said. Much love to you from me.
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