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Sven
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0 posted 2000-12-14 11:42 PM


He writes his songs from a tender, open heart
In a quiet voice, singing sweet and clear
You can see the love in each and every part
As he sings to the one he holds most dear

Opening the book, he begins to write
Heartfelt words flowing freely from his pen
Telling of moments spent by candlelight
Making the love of the now seem like then

The words begin to take shape and form
Coming together in a tender whole
Words that could make even the coldest heart warm
They are words of life and of his soul

He puts down his pen, now the tale is done
Ready to be sung to her, bright as sun

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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1 posted 2000-12-14 11:49 PM


Sven, as you close in on your goal, you continue to surprise us with your insights...and this is Parker certainly...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-12-15 12:22 PM


Opening the book, he begins to write
Heartfelt words flowing freely from his pen
Telling of moments spent by candlelight
Making the love of the now seem like then
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yes...this is p-man alright...poet of heartstrings ...
well done tribute to one of our fav and best romantic swoon makers  
I always tell him he belongs on a pedestal and now he has one    
great work Sven
jm

dgvarner
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3 posted 2000-12-15 01:29 AM


very nice write sven    i must say, its hard not to keep a soft spot in my heart for such named flirt... teehee...

hugs, g

"people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s.

Paula Finn
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4 posted 2000-12-15 02:18 AM


Sven again you have taken us on a journey that ends with us knowing a poet  little better...Parker is such a romantic and you touched that perfectly
ethome
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5 posted 2000-12-15 05:39 AM


I really appreciate this one too Sven... I love the way Parker writes.... I don't know how he gets that down home twist to come out so classy and unique... but he does.. wonderful job here Sven ... you do him and yourself proud!!
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6 posted 2000-12-16 11:13 PM


Sunshine, thank you for seeing him in my words. . .

Jan, I tried not to put him on TOO big of a pedestal. . . he might get a big head!     Thank you. . .

dg, I know that. . . which is why it's here. . .

Paula, indeed he is one of our most talented Knights. . . he knows the way to the heart. . .thank you my friend. . .

ethome, I think that he keeps it in bottles on a shelf!!     Maybe if you ask really nice. . . thank you my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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