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He Took Clay
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He Took Clay |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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He took Clay Just a block common stock with key unlocked a vision took nothing formed something looked within saw love feather of dove sun above thinking of her smile hands molded twisted and folded sculpted and sighed passion grew from nothing made something looked within felt love clay formed with breath and depth and desire he so aspired to lift love higher to church spire from clay’s mire of nothing to something looked within made love just a block common stock with key unlocked his vision and gave her life Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Susnshine~ I love every fabulous word here.........this is so gorgeous!!!!  -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful artistic eye you have my friend in more ways than one. Truely a wonderful write. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is exquisite love, it really and truly is. Utterly oustanding, such vision, and you are flying high with this Kid! Excellant, Paris judged a beauty contest Gave an apple as the prize Paris didn't realise the rest Looked into Helens pretty eyes Trojan wars his courage test Finally the wooden horse Within the soldiers wait Never accept gifts of course They remember just too late They;re dead now of course  take care kid Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* and you took words weaving with great beauty that we too could see this wonderful vision through your eyes. This is incredibly beautiful, dear one. I loved it. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, He brought the night into the light. *L* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA, finally figured out the secret behind the graphics...LOL...finally....thank you... Mark, welcome back! Long time gone...good to have you home again...and thank you... Now Marsha, look at what you went and did...well done yourself!...thanks!... Startime, I so enjoy your comments, thank you!... Yes, Sy....he did indeed, thank you Sir for taking time to read...now...smile...{~,^} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What a beautiful way of expressing the creation of love... you are an artist in your own right, sunshine  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey 'Deer...it's just those Golden Oldies playing that give me all of this inspiration...so perhaps I'm just a borrower and readjuster of art, hey?... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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