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SEA
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0 posted 2000-12-14 11:59 AM



James, your words are so loving
Melting hearts so gently
Love the way you love a kiss
Everything about you is romantic
Especially the way you want,
1 particular woman
2 lucky is she, as women must surely line up
3 deep, to fall at your feet, just
4 a chance to win your heart, yet you don't notice~
5 times over, you stay true to your love

~SEA~

                      

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1 posted 2000-12-14 12:13 PM


You are SO clever...well done!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
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2 posted 2000-12-14 12:44 PM


*giggling with delight* yep this is a keeper. I loved it. Well done. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


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3 posted 2000-12-14 12:53 PM


i knew when i saw the title this was gonna be different and twas cool yuh. go james!
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4 posted 2000-12-14 01:00 PM


And is he gonna love this...OH YES...
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5 posted 2000-12-14 01:12 PM


He will love those lips  ...

               ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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6 posted 2000-12-14 03:15 PM


Sunshine~   thank you

Startime~   thank you

Walt~ thanks sweetie  

Paula~ I hope so  

Victoria~  

-SEA

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 12-14-2000).]

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7 posted 2000-12-14 03:20 PM


SEA.......you captured him very well....oh my I love this one, you are doing so great with these acrostic....love it..

((hugs))
Charisma

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8 posted 2000-12-14 03:30 PM


Sea will you marry me...only kidding now and yet your softness is exactly one of the beautiful traits that I so love and desire within a woman.
And a particular kiss can melt my heart so quickly, so completely.
How magically and magnificantly a kiss unlocks the door of loneliness and reveals the beauty and happiness found within love and romance.
Thank you sweet poet for your softness and tenderness and believe me I do notice and appreciate all of the beauty of women.
James

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9 posted 2000-12-14 03:35 PM


Circe, this is utterly wonderful, each of them is a real jewel, and so perfect. You are utterly brilliant at these, you really are
take care
                 Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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10 posted 2000-12-14 03:36 PM


James~ I can't........I'm already wearing a ring........but I will give you kisses......and I'll never make you beg......


~SEA

                
              
                  

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11 posted 2000-12-14 03:38 PM


Mushy~ you snuck in there........ thank you so much!   -SEA
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12 posted 2000-12-15 02:33 PM


Sea I accept my fate...kisses are good...I live for kisses...James
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13 posted 2004-05-18 02:14 AM


It was fun revisiting this...James
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