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a corpse, becoming |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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and still... you poke you prod your words your actions are a very long stick jabbing at the slowly dying in wicked grin vigilant for a sign of life your cue to commence to swing again murdering a corpse becoming... desirous of a spark within I think you thought you could steal mine... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wow........POWERFUL write dear........you blew my doors off!  -SEA |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
OH gosh this is very powerful. I hope they see they cannot steal your spark. My heart goes out to you, dear one. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Serenity, Ooh, this is so dark, powerful and incredibly ominous. What an up front and to the point avalanche of feelings. I hope you won't feel this way for long. I wish you better days on the horizon. Elise |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Very dark and strong.. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
My sweet, no-one is capable of stealing your spark as it is fueled with the eternal beauty within your words and heart. Now scorch us with some more of your masterpieces baby. YEEEEEEEHAAAAAWWWWWW, nobody get in her way. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Dawn of the Dead? Smiles and thank yous abound...Sea, Startime, athena, dragon, and m'angelheart...I appreciate your kindness, as always. Now, back to the crypt, I creep... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
THis one floored me WOW... I hope that all is well, take care of that heart of yours. VERY POwerful words. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thank you much, m'brian...have missed you!!! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
My first thought, WOW! Then when scrolling down, I saw someone else said that. I hope you don't mind that that's my reaction, too. This is jam-packed with emotion and clenched teeth. |
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