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Bilal
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since 2000-12-13
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0 posted 2000-12-14 03:40 AM


~Allah cares~
Lancelot {Bilal} ©2000

Mom loves her child
Considers it her pride

Dad works for food
All day chops wood

They love their kins
Stop them from sins

They expect kids to love
Emotions as clean white dove

Kids love parents back
Love grows in a big stack

Allah creates wierd things
From micro sperms & eggs

Creates a human so complex
Different size and sex

He loves His own creatures
No matter how big or miniatures

Expects us to love him back
He has all and nothing lack

Tests in life are always there
God sees just how we bare

All the weight and the pain
Then results are always gain

May be not in life physical
But soul is to be all eternal

Beleive in religion & trust Allah
Perceive it well & read Kalimah

Be surprised to see your world
Changed, completed, fulfilled & bold !



© Copyright 2000 Bilal - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-12-14 01:55 PM


Hey...I will try anything twice! Back to the top with you...I simply could not let Allah slip slide off of the page! and The Kalimah?
Not familiar with that, not yet. But you sure make it sound good!

Bilal
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since 2000-12-13
Posts 66

2 posted 2000-12-15 10:57 PM


Thanx for responding Serenity. Its very nice of you. Kalimah is kindda religious statement or oath when we enter Islam (the world fastest growing religion).
Bilal

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
3 posted 2000-12-16 12:32 PM


I enjoyed the thoughts in this poem, enjoyed they way they were expressed, and learned from you, too!  What more can anyone ask?  Back to the top.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
4 posted 2000-12-16 12:41 PM


i once wrote a poem with this line:
"love is love is love is love is love"

and i truly believe:
god is god is god is god is god

meaning, no matter what name He reveals himself under, it's still different facets of him he's letting us see...

*sigh*... well, that's what i believe but he's not talking to me lately so if you talk to Allah, tell him i'm right here waiting and wondering and if he could say hi, i'd appreciate it... *sighagain*.... put in a good word for me, ok?

thanks for the read... it was full of truths

- all you can ever really ask out of life is a sincere apology and some decent poetry -

Bilal
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since 2000-12-13
Posts 66

5 posted 2000-12-16 01:38 PM


Thanx Kcsgrandma and Doreen Peri for responding.
Well, if you take one step towards Allah, He'll take ten towards you. All it needs is a little commitment and deep from the heart desire to love Him and be His follower! Trust me He'll never let you down but would surely give you challenges to prove yourself to Him.
Bilal

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