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ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01
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0 posted 2000-12-13 08:45 PM


Entwined Hearts

Two souls entwined in one heart
Never will they part
Their love started many lifetimes ago
It is ageless, timeless
and deeply embedded in every breath
It survives death
Their love will never end
It will revolve again and again


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Marsha
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
1 posted 2000-12-13 08:54 PM


Laura, this is truly a beautiful piece, it really is outstanding. This is shining with love, it is brilliant and so precious. I love it, and I know I'm the first of many who
seeing it will praise it.
Take care
              Mushy Marsha
                    
Great work, really excellant
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2000-12-13 10:28 PM


baby,
this is beautiful! full of that huge
loving heart of yours. i take it this
is about US (hoping i am right)...at any
rate excellent! loved this!

love,
me

Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
3 posted 2000-12-13 10:32 PM


*sigh* incredibly beautiful depiction of eternal love. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


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