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raleighbttrfly
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0 posted 2000-12-13 07:53 PM


Your damaged heart speaks to me
Your pain has been made mine
The tears you cry fall from my eyes
In this love divine

The sorrow you whispered softly goes by
But the sound of the pain will never die
The guilt that beats in your heart beats in mine
There is so little distance between you and I

You pray for an end
I long for a start
And it is only are ourselves we make fall apart
Living in this lie of love divine

Bitter regret that won’t heal with time
Our souls we have shared now intertwined
Tears fall in rivers washing away the lines
Forming a landscape of our love divine

The pain still so new the scars faded and old
Nightmares come and some never go
All that is yours you make it now mine
And this we call a love divine



[This message has been edited by raleighbttrfly (edited 12-13-2000).]

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Rosalind Palafox
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1 posted 2000-12-13 08:00 PM


I enjoyed reading your poem. This topic is something i haven't read in a while. Thanks for the read.

"Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb

Startime
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2 posted 2000-12-13 08:01 PM


This is so beautiful. Worlds apart but together in Love Divine. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


raleighbttrfly
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3 posted 2000-12-13 08:46 PM


Thank you both for the time you took to read and reply. This pome is about a vary complex relationship and was truly writen from the heart. I'm glade you liked it.

I am not always lonely even if I am always alone

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