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Love’s Song
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Love’s Song |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Love’s Song Karen Torbiak July 8, 2000 She stands prepared having the summons heard and having read reports written in her sisters words Sadness if reflected in her face as she comes to attend this council to receive direction as she they send She bows before those seated in the Judgment Room with fluid grace those whose rank is far above the angels sent from before God’s face She is one of the messengers as were all her sisters sent before sent as warning with the hope to kindle love again in hard hearts made sore Her hair is of light brown resting in soft flowing waves upon shoulders golden tan blending in perfection on this one who saves The gown that drapes her body is of the softest white that reflects the colors of the rainbow with each move made light A golden circlet showing rank adorns her hair showing the name given to this woman most fair Love’s Song she is called for she is one who whispers to the soul in gentle melody played from the heart, sending love is her goal She streaks across the heavens with golden harp held near that it’s magic spark love’s song in the hearts of men who fear The trail she leaves is seen by all differently as each soul sees the loss of love’s song is awed by it’s mystery Approaching earth she sighs already hearing the songs of hate and prays she can soften hearts and change the human fate She see the colors of hate filling the skies bringing a moan from her soul as to their aid she flies Black fills the air around her from all the hate filled war killing children so many innocent who witness all its gore Red weaves its way through all the deepness of the black showing pain and hate given to those too weak of heart to fight back As crystal rainbow tears flow freely down her face she sends a pleading prayer to save the innocent from such disgrace She flees high to the mountain tops where the air is still clean to prepare sounds of love to send into the hearts of those who dream With harp of gold she weaves the waves of sound so true her gentle fingers caress strings bringing sounds of love of what man much do The sounds of love surround her as with love in her heart she plays she draws on nature as she sends songs to hearts still seeking gentle ways The whisper of the wind in flowing gentleness through the leaves so green caresses the soul with warm comfort to the eyes not seen The babbling of a brook flowing over rocks as it goes on its merry way soothing to the heart left heavy from the battles fought this day The birds singing sweetly in full cheerful morning voice bringing light into hearts that this day they’ll make a loving choice The patter of rain drops as they feed the earth and gently fall whispering in heart’s of softness as they respond to love’s call These sounds so pure she sends deep within the receiving heart of those who write the words that lets love’s music do it part All sounds of nature she weaves together in colors filled with light sent from her heart to those of man designed for love and sent with all her might With prayers of hope that love’s song reach the heart she to the stars ascends Leaving sounds of love flowing freely and hope that man’s hard hearts it bends Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Startime, Found your writing excellent, and with many words of thought. I thought that it was a little lengthy, but please don't take this as a detriment, for I found it very beautiful. BC |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Thank you Bill. I know it is lengthy but when I get the vision ones I just have to go into detail. *sigh* still I am glad you enjoyed it. Much love and hugs from me to you. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Startime, "Love to send into the hearts of those who dream". I hope your heart is full of dreams that come true. Beautiful writing!! Much love, Elise |
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