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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2000-12-12 11:38 PM


Fluid – fingers
~melody~
Walking scales
~serenity~
silences
seceding sound
-sing of string-
pronounced, profound…

A color—STREAK—
On canvas, plain…
Never – WILL IT!
Remain the same.

A sonnet’s song
In plaintive plea
Reverberates
Eternity.

Every line
That you might pen
Strikes – resounds
My soul within…

All begging for the best in me…

Like skipping stones
Across still pond
I cherish you
This silent song.

”Deliver me?
I don’t belong.”

And only shadows weep with me…

I wrap the warmth
About me now –
“Dream sweet…” I think
my silent vow,

a prayer to see you in my sleep…

He is my love.
He is my keep.



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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2000-12-13 12:04 PM


Fluid – fingers
~melody~
Walking scales
~serenity~
silences
seceding sound
-sing of string-
pronounced, profound…
===================
”Deliver me?
I don’t belong.”

And only shadows weep with me…

I wrap the warmth
About me now –
“Dream sweet…” I think
my silent vow,

a prayer to see you in my sleep…

He is my love.
He is my keep.

=================
my queen of serene ...
my oh my this is lovely ...
every line was a beautiful whispered promise
and the title is so perfect ...
sleep sweet me sweet sen.
me loves ya
me

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-12-13 12:57 PM


This makes me feel at peace. Marvelous!  
Masked Intruder
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Near golden sunsets
3 posted 2000-12-13 01:10 AM


It's snowing!
It's snowing!
It's snowing!

*GRINS* *GRINS* *GRINS*

ethome
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4 posted 2000-12-13 04:38 AM


Wonderful time alone reflecting!! You captured the singer songwriter's feelings here with this one it would make a good ballad....good show ...Celeste!!
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5 posted 2000-12-13 07:34 AM


Serenity~

'Like skipping stones
Across still pond
I cherish you
This silent song.'


Yes ... yes, she said !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2000-12-13 09:11 AM


the "never - WILL IT" came across loud and strong....

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




serenity blaze
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7 posted 2000-12-14 12:30 PM


JM...thanks m'twin...and sleep is pretty elusive for me at night...as ya well know! Hugs, and you hang in there! Merry Christmas, lovie...

Sharon...good, good, I'm so glad that it sent you some peace...I'm gonna miss you while you're gone, yanno that tho. HUGS

Masked...you crazy nut...you know? I've only been able to say that three times in thirty nine years...and I do get excited about (sorry to my snowbound friends...)

ethome...hugs (or is it huggles) for the terrific compliment...Celeste thanks you and so do I...grin.

Mom? I have the occasional moment...smiles...still working on it! Thanks to you, not just for reading, but for being you and showing so much concern. Hugs to you too...

Karilea...thanks for noticing that line...I'm still scratching my head about it though, wasn't quite sure if the intent of irony came across at trying to WILL serenity into a chaotic mind...so I thank you. I feel like we are quite on the same wavelength these days!

Hugs to all...I'm going to off to read now!

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