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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2000-12-12 09:51 PM




Destiny awaits these dreams
Serenity seeking me it seems

The list is made,
         terrors tossed
Reinvention
         at all cost

Webs of doubt
            swept away
Smiles of hope
            begin today

What’s the outcome for you and me?
It will be
        what it will be

Discard the arcane secret wall
Litter the walk with flowers tall
Open the gate let sunshine in

Starting over,
           beginning
                 again.

Struting out with
           seductive leer

Replacement of the veiling here

Time will tell of this  
                inbetween

While reinventing
                Norma Jean


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-12-12 09:56 PM


This is wonderful...in many, many ways...this is quite wonderful...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Sven
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2 posted 2000-12-12 09:58 PM


Can't wait to see what the outcome will be. . .

Excellent. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


WhtDove
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3 posted 2000-12-12 10:02 PM


Sharon you got quite the inspiration here!
I love how you've put this together!  

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD


wayoutwalt
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4 posted 2000-12-12 10:43 PM


sen be great and so be you
this a statement is so true

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2000-12-12 11:26 PM


sharon? I love you. And I don't give a damn who knows...and remember always the point of that story too..that, SHE was in control...'k?  HUGS to you...and looking forward to reading about your many adventures..and hey? Write me into a couple?

AND HEY???? Merry Christmas. And a Joyous Solistice.

Paula Finn
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6 posted 2000-12-13 12:36 PM


This is so cool...its great that you can reinvent yourself...make a whole new you to show the world...good for you
Poet deVine
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7 posted 2000-12-13 04:58 AM


Thank you all. And serenity, I will never forget the story of Marilyn Monroe..the inspiration that story gave me will be the impetus for that long awaited novel!!!
Poertree
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8 posted 2000-12-13 04:34 PM


sharon

i really really liked this  

P

serenity blaze
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9 posted 2000-12-14 01:50 PM


*bump* because I miss her already...and this reads like a warm hug for me!!!!
Irie
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10 posted 2000-12-19 07:28 PM


Sharon this is awesome.....

Now...someone please tell me....

Serenity...why are you missing her?
Has Sharon gone some where? Did I miss something?


~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



Breathe~
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11 posted 2000-12-19 07:32 PM


I love the flow of this!

To re-invent oneself would be delightful...Thinking I should add that to my X-mas list!  

Great words...


I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan

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12 posted 2000-12-19 08:02 PM


Irie? No need to panic...(or so I keep telling myself..lol) Sharon is enjoying the holidays with her family. And so we should we all.

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 12-19-2000).]

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