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Release The Falcon
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Release The Falcon |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Trace of finger feathered thigh, a whispered kiss in cleft surprise... simple salt upon my tongue dewdrop of the morning come... to feel your chest pressed next to mine, entwined, our bodies serpentine-- desire in a fire, rage-- take me, turn another page... release the falcon hunt the sky... make me yours, I make you mine. And no, I'm not the least surprised. I spied the sweetness in your eyes... Now I want - no, need you, more... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
turn the page!! turn the page!!  "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love this alot..nicely done ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Serenity, This is hot, burning, steaming. Very beautiful, great poem. Loved it. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Oooh, Oooh..I do like this..Very Muchly... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
In the words of the great green alien... Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! "Satan is my motor." - Cake |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Excellent Sernenity..... In very few words you've said SO much! Love the title too! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
soaring through the sky, the falcon finds a home. . . wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Rindercella Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 64La La Land |
This is said very well. I like the form you use in expressing your thoughts. Seems to flow as if in conversation with your heart. *If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours* |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Loved the way it flows and how gentle it is. Very good! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serenity...you knew I knew you knew this sings... Fantastic...utterly wow! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
YOWCH!! Them saints ain't marchin' in now!! I LOVE IT! Whew! Let that falcon go!!!! Shoot somebody the bird!!!!  er, serenity...i like the poem.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
my many thanks to all..but with this WAS a repost from number eight! here's hoping for understanding, this time. Love to all...AND I just had to edit..here's hoping that the one it was written for, will notice..how's that? HUGS ALL. and m'deer? GET A GRIP. rofl... Thank you. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 12-13-2000).] |
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