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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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you are the moonbeams within the shadows < !signature-->sometimes a shadow stalking the light in the shadows of my mind you are the star in the darkest night you are the sunshine that reflects lavender in midsummer rain you are the dew upon canvas of dawn painted upon my windowpane why should i surrender to anyone else but you? you are the captain of my true blue seas even though you have a woman crew like a chef.. many delicacies i do not care about cheap tarts you always come back to me a butterfly fluttering in your heart i wish you could hear strings of my heart sigh each time our words pluck good bye it really does not matter why?..I love you ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-12-2000).] |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
How Pretty...  I loved this..Much... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Wow bravo!!!! some day I want to write so well. Very good. Love and light, Richard |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
someday - you may yet replace that 'crew' - even tho I don't think he deserves you ~G~ - either way I love this poem |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Yo ho ho, lil Victoria - Methinks this poem be written fer me, else why would you write about the sea? eh? naturally, I will bathe at least one week before we meet. I promise! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you LL...appreciate you nice comments thank you for reading..  Richard..you are just too modest..thank you very much for peeking in Bill..ok daddy..haa..glad you are feeling a little better bill..HUGS.. john...promises..promises ha..thank you for peeking though your porthole..  James...thank you James..HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Victoria, this is wonderful and so well written. I really love this one, it's fantastic. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you kindly Marsha.. so pleased you enjoyed ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a classic love poem |
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