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Victoria
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0 posted 12-12-2000 02:38 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Victoria

you are the moonbeams within the shadows
sometimes a shadow stalking the light
  in the shadows of my mind
you are the star in the darkest night

you are the sunshine that reflects
lavender in midsummer rain
you are the dew upon canvas of dawn
painted upon my windowpane

why should i surrender to anyone else but you?
you are the captain of my true blue seas
even though you have a woman crew

like a chef.. many delicacies
i do not care about cheap tarts
you always come back to me
a butterfly fluttering in your heart

i wish you could hear strings of my heart sigh
each time our words pluck good bye
it really does not matter why?..I love you

               ~Victoria~



A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  



[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-12-2000).]
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Lady Lightning
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1 posted 12-12-2000 03:05 PM       View Profile for Lady Lightning   Email Lady Lightning   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady Lightning

How Pretty...    I loved this..Much... ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown
maxtec1
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2 posted 12-12-2000 03:43 PM       View Profile for maxtec1   Email maxtec1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit maxtec1's Home Page   View IP for maxtec1

Wow bravo!!!! some day I want to write so well. Very good.
Love and light,
Richard
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3 posted 12-12-2000 03:43 PM       View Profile for Wilfred Yeats   Email Wilfred Yeats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Wilfred Yeats's Home Page   View IP for Wilfred Yeats

someday - you may yet replace that 'crew' - even tho I don't think he deserves you ~G~ - either way I love this poem
LngJhnAg
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4 posted 12-12-2000 03:54 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Yo ho ho, lil Victoria - Methinks this poem be written fer me, else why would you write about the sea?  eh?  naturally, I will bathe at least one week before we meet.  I promise!
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5 posted 12-12-2000 03:58 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very nice...James
Victoria
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6 posted 12-12-2000 05:33 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

thank you LL...appreciate you nice comments
thank you for reading..

Richard..you are just too modest..thank you very much for peeking in

Bill..ok daddy..haa..glad you are feeling
a little better bill..HUGS..

john...promises..promises ha..thank you for peeking though your porthole..

James...thank you James..HUGS

              ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Marsha
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7 posted 12-12-2000 06:41 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Victoria, this is wonderful and so well written. I really love this one, it's fantastic.
Take care
                Mushy Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Victoria
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thank you kindly Marsha.. so pleased you enjoyed

                     ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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a classic love poem
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