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SEA
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0 posted 2000-12-12 12:39 PM



Dreams of you last night
so real it would seem
why aren't we still close?

~*~

I miss you so much
my friend for so long
Why don't we ever talk?

~*~

I cried this morning
thinking of your smile
Why can't we be friends?

~*~

~SEA~

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Wesley the Blue
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1 posted 2000-12-12 12:42 PM


Great!  I think you're better at these than I am. Oh well.

KM

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2 posted 2000-12-12 12:44 PM


often asked these questions myself...well done
Cerenity
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3 posted 2000-12-12 12:48 PM


Hi Sea,

I would like to try the challenge, is there a certain number of words, I see that you used four, four, five??? or any special something I should know? Not good at this kind of stuff and need to learn I feel, thanks, by the way I enjoyed yours.

Love, Cerenity

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4 posted 2000-12-12 12:54 PM


WTB~ thank you for the challenge, these are wonderful!  

Kaile~ glad you liked  

Cerenity~ I've just been introduced to these and it's 5, 5, and the last 5 asks a question of why? they are neat huh!   -SEA

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5 posted 2000-12-12 12:56 PM


Circe, this is brilliant, whatever this challenge is you are obviously very good at it. Really wonderful work
take care
            Mushy
              

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