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A Joyous Affair
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A Joyous Affair |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Caught in the moment, swing wildly in bliss There is a love-play wrought surely as this Tension strings severed, away in a rush Two lovers meet here, 'mid cheeks all ablush Finding a pathway in darkness so deep Trusting it is here, no promise to keep Hoping on yonder, a valley won't find Knowing to further, must leave it behind Asleep on the hill, think not of lost hopes For now in balloon, loose-tethered are ropes Arms reach for touching, dreams laid forth a hand Somewhere 'tween moment, placed life's golden band Horizon is shared for keeping of love Tender kiss touches from lover above Meet me in skyshine; I'll hold you fore'er Cast upon seekers, a joyous affair [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 12-12-2000).] |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walt~ this is just beyond beautiful!!  -SEA |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, a truly wonderful event, I enjoyed your imagery and use of symbols, and for once, I understand where your coming from, You confusing old bliter . Loved it as always . Thanx . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanky so much SEA Tom now listen here do not try to understand my poems. do or do not there is no try hmmmmm |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Now this is what I call FUN..!!! |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Walt the romantic!! I love it.  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
WOWSER...this is great...such a lovely sweet side of you...I like muchly |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ Delight is mine ! Tethered to your romantic rhyme. Hey ... remember WAY BACK to that 'Moses did the wave' thing ???? I got it ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
nan thanx for boosting this lil fledgling rhyme PDV smiles Paula hubba hubba Marge I so loved that poem and I know you did too but I it never did catch on...should i repost it? |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Walt, Wondeful I really love this one, thank you for sharing. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Walt, don't try to vie for the romantic hie not when you touch the sky with this skyshine sigh... Keep showing this bit of you... and we'll have to keep producing more crowns for the Kings of Romance...  Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
cerenity and sunshine thank yuh so much |
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