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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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Oregon

0 posted 2000-12-12 01:23 AM



Rhythm Rain
Virginia Salter

listen to the rhythm of the rain

as it trickles down the drain

hear it splatter ‘gainst the window pane

drizzle streams of rainbows

across the sky

then blacken deeper the night

as it mirrors effervescent light

giving contrast

filled with delight

in harmony with my heart

a rhythm patterned in the dark

to my spirit gives a spark

and my footsteps marking time

as sprinkles collect in rhyme

a glaze in the autumn clime


© October 10,  2000

© Copyright 2000 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
1 posted 2000-12-12 01:36 AM


I could hear the rain.
I just love how the rain
makes me feel. Enjoyed the
pitter patter of the drops.

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2000-12-12 01:38 AM


Thank you inot, for the read and the lovely comment.
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2000-12-12 02:49 AM


VAS, this rain rhythm was so vivid now I have to...Nevermind.
Great write  
Be well, laugh long
Kethry


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau



VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
4 posted 2000-12-12 10:23 AM


Thanks, Kethry!  LOL, that certainly would be vivid.
vandana
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5 posted 2000-12-12 12:44 PM


Liked it!!!!!
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